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for Krowe

by GodOfInsanity

person I-Love-Trunks1
schedule April 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I love how Annej, Krowe, and Varka are going to have a threesome. I love sound of that pairing! I love this story so much! Cant wait for more!
person Ghettoe
schedule June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The problem with this story is that there is too much yet nothing substantial. Basically, a lot of nothing. Too many characters and too many sub plots that just don't connect hence even though it's been 14 chapters you can summarize this whole plot in about three sentences. The story is called Krowe yet it has very little to do with him. In fact so far, he's ran away with a human whom he may or may not be connected with, we don't know yet even though 14 chapters have passed. It would have been better to develop and focus on certain characters because overall, they are all so loosely developed and I can't bring myself to care for any of the characters. It ultimately affects the plot in that it kind of doesn't really exist. It's like a bunch of under developed vignettes trying to mesh into one story... Some characters add nothing like Red and White as do subplots. There's lose bits of sex here and there that I skip because they are just so random... If I were to answer who, what, when, where, how in regards to this story I would get young tied. More importantly is how inappropriately named this story is. It's like calling a book The Great Gatsby not bothering to enhance or enlighten the reader on who Gatsby is... Ultimately you lose interested. Too many lenses yet no picture. It's not even that this story is badly written because that's not it, it's just overall really lacking.
person Ghettoe
schedule June 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excuse the typos in my review cause I'm typing on my phone and miss a lot of errors. Also the reason why I was straight forward. Normally, I tend to go on lengthy rants pin pointing specific inconsistencies but hard to do on a mobile.
person Franz
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please finish Krowe, I loved it very, very much. You are doing a great Job. I read it today for the first time and I could not stop until the end. I would realy like to know more about Krowe's past, I bet he is very old. Thank you for your work and for sharing with us. I liked too Prometheus, a great movie.
person Franz
schedule March 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please finish Krowe, I loved it very, very much. You are doing a great Job. I read it today for the first time and I could not stop until the end. I would realy like to know more about Krowe's past, I bet he is very old. Thank you for your work and for sharing with us. I liked too Prometheus, a great movie.
person Zeltz
schedule February 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I cannot tell you how much I loved reading Krowe.
I read everything available in one go and as you can see, have just finished reading the last chappie.
I hope you will continue updating it as I can't stop bouncing around waiting for more. Hehehe.
Hope to hear more from you soon!
*sends cyber cookies over*
person ILoveWyatt
schedule March 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love this story so much! Cant wait for more!
person Maria
schedule December 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hhahaha!! I Love Krowe's reaction, though I am a bit confused as to how Annej and Varka are suddenly so intuned with one another. Also, why did Annej lose his memory of being Varka's brother? Hhah, I love Krowe's reaction to them all "dateing" I'm glad that he seems all for it^^ Sooo....Nexsis was a sub for Annej?? Is that true? I thought Varka had some sort of romantic thing for his father, so it all was because he couldn't be with Annej?? Great chapter!! Questions have been answered, but now there are more!! Lol, update soon^^
schedule November 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMG! i had a feeling they were related cause of the hair and height but I still got a shock!
person Maria
schedule November 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
BROTHER!!!!????? Brother?? That...That was NOT what I was expecting at all!! Holy hell^^ You are good! Damn, this was an amazing chapter! But I wonder what has gotten him to remember?? And if he is Varka's brother, then WHY was he in that hospital getting his blood taken and such?? Please update soon!! This is getting so dramatic!!