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for Big Poppa ~ Part II

by Laevi

person ha
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love it
absolutely love this story

love da foursome sex...want more
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhh.. Brilliant just brilliant.... Can't wait for the tour of the club... Hehe.... I love it!!... Can't wait for more
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! You are a brilliant writer... I love the way the story is heading and can't wait to read more
person h
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
big poppa is so awesome , glad its back!!!
person kylee123
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent Laevi. So poor Mark kind of overdid his new lifestyle? Very funny. I loved chapter 4 where Poppa tells Siarl about Jean's incident. Very nicely done. I am glad that Jean is getting his own love. I am looking forward to seeing the club. I can just imagine Jean and Delwyn's faces when they get inside.
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it! This will definitely be reread, much like part 1. These characters are so fun and interesting, and also really hot together! I loved chapter 6 ;)
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
person rotture
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Do you have an alert lost for this story? If so, I would love to be added. I just discovered this story and read through the previous one and then this in almost one go, and let me just say "delicious!". I look forward to reading more. C:
schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it... I just finished reading the first part and seen this and I was soooo happy... please I want more.... Big Poppa and Delwyn are just Brilliant and I can't wait to read more... please please update as soon as you get inspired...

Io_non_ho_paura
schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I love you.