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for Big Poppa ~ Part II

by Laevi

person bambi4real
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Did you expect this many people to be interested in Big Poppa II? I remember reading the first one a while ago. I don't remember geting to the end of it though and when you stopped for a while I didn't even notice it wasn't being updated.Now that I have found it again I went back and reread the whole thing in one sitting and started on this one. I have to say I really like the Siarl and Jean bits the best. They are like the young couple discovering love for the first time and Poppa and Del are like the old married couple settleing in. Definitely would like to see more of JEan and Siarl. From the fist Poppa I would never have guessed Jean was so interesting or had so much character. Great job so far!
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Maybe reassurances that Pryce likes his role would be in order. It is kind of an exotic threesome. Pryce is committed to this for his entire life? Is there a safe word he can use?
person Jaylagal
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the Big Poppa series and applaud your work. When Poppa threw the pan it made him seem more like a normal male instead of the calm teddy bear you have had him act in the past few chapters. I just love your work and can't wait to read the rest of the chapters. Hope Pyrce is okay.
person kylee123
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This part two could be called "the liberation of Jean". Who knew that he was such a kinky queen! It is as if he just fell into the perfect life that he had secretly dreamed about. I am sure Jean will be a wonderful owner to Pryce but I wonder where Siarl got him from. I guess that it is fine as long as Pryce is a willing and happy slave. I do wonder if Siarl will not get jealous of having Pryce around all the time. You have certainly outdone yourself this time Laevi. I am thoroughly enjoying this story. Poppa's reaction was quite amusing too.
person kylee123
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, Jean is turning out to be quite something isn't he? At first look he appears to be just like Delwyn, but underneath his sweet and quiet exterior, Jean is a bit of a firecracker! He has taken to the club like a duck to water. He is even knocking Siarl's socks off. I think they will be a very well matched couple.
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This has taken a turn for the kinkier side. Some of it pretty dark stuff. I'm glad Poppa and Del are happy without most of that. Jean's fantasies are interesting! And I'm liking the Jean/Siarl pairing. It left the story wide open for lots of lustiness. I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with this.
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it.... Can't wait to read more

Io_non_ha_paura
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely two chapters.... Can't wait for more

Io_non_ha_paura
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooooooooooo I think I love you.
I just recently read Big Poppa just as you were finishing it and I'll admit honestly the whole bear thing was a huge "RUN AWAY" factor when I first saw it. (I'm just not a fan of bears... not sure why but hey, what can you do) But as I read the whole storie I found I loved the characters. And I was'nt expecting a sequle but I'm glad there is one. I like Jean ^_^
So like I said I think I love you, and I know I love the way you update. Your updating skills make me jealous... Im green with envy. XD
Keep up the good work hon

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person kylee123
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it Laevi. Iy is great to see the four guys getting wild and crazy. I loved the club scene. Poppa and Delwyn really are an insatiable pair. The will be a great example for Jean and Shiarl. I can't wait to read more.