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for Big Poppa ~ Part II

by Laevi

person kylee123
schedule July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Leave it to Big Poppa to come up with words of wisdom for this challenging situation. I think things will work out okay if Poppa has a talk with Siarl. I don't think that the three of them can change the world. They would probably end up being killed along with Pryce if they tried to cause any trouble. I just love Price. He is so innocent despite being a trained sex slave. He is like a young bride for Jean - a bride who gives deep kisses to other men. I laughed so hard at that. I love the story. I can't wait to see how things turn out. I hope Jean will truly take good care of Pryce.
person kylee123
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Pryce! What a life he has had! I hope Jean will take good of the poor precious boy. The two of them are perfect for each other. I wonder what is going on in Jean's head. he is trying to think of Pryce as his fun boy but obviously Jean is already bonded with him beyond that point. I also wonder how is Siarl is feeling too. I am very eager to see what you are planning for these three unique characters. I am glad that Jean did meet up with Delwyn for Christmas after all.
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the way the story is going now between Jean and Pryce! I liked Siarl at first, but as time went on, I didn't like the way things were going between he and Jean, but I love Pryce~ I hope Jean and his puppy end up happy together, and I do wish they could do something about the horrible slave trade.
person NotAkuma
schedule July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Came for the smut stayed for the uniquely developed characters. Love this story! Especially Pryce he's adorable.
person Marbles29
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I agree wit Kyless 100%..I think something drastic has to happen for him to realize wat he's missing with Jean and Pyrce..
person Roseykins
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is such a great story. The way the story is progressing is so surprising to me. Pryce's story is so sad. He was taken as a child and trained to be a slave. I want him to be happy. I hope he can stay with Jean and get the love he deserves.
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no Pryce. Some lifestyles aren't harmless. Not when taking small children and making them become slaves. What is Jean going to do? This could be very bad.
person kylee123
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. I just knew that Jean and Pryce would start falling in love! I love it! I am accusing Siarl of being a little lazy about the relationship. He is a hard working king, but if he is going to have a queen, then he has to put some work into the relationship. He might enjoy it if he puts some more effort into joining into the fun with Jean and Pryce. He is missing out on the fun.
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, I kicked myself to finally tell you how much I love your guys. Siarl and Jean are a fantastic addition. Give my more! (chapters, not more guys LOL)
schedule July 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this..but since you made a part 2 to this are u goigng to do the same for Sparky..i would love to see wat nicky and Angel are up to