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for Big Poppa ~ Part II

by Laevi

person Kortman
schedule February 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap! I love Mary to death, completely dying of laughter right now!
person eroburn
schedule September 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
oh its so cute :)
person Jamie Weaver
schedule August 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
once again i couldnt stop reading how do you come up with all your stories. god i think im in love with them. lol
person kylee123
schedule July 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Leonin and Siarl are really going to bite the bullet and move in together? Awesome. Big Poppa strikes again. I love Jean's fantasy rooms. The room with the waterfall really gave me the feeling of them being outside. The tentacle room is quite outrageous. I also am glad to see Pryce getting a little bit bolder. I got a good laugh out of him teasing Jean. Jean is very lucky to have him. Great writing Laevi.
person kylee123
schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think Siarl and Leonin will make a good couple. They are both busy men so they will have to make the time to see each other more often. Now of course I am super curious to see what Leonin looks like. Your description of him and his tattoo makes me want to see a picture of him and Siarl together.
person kylee123
schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice love scene with Siarl and Leonin. I would love to see a picture of them together. As always I love Jean and Pryce too. They are so cute together. The show and tell phone sex made me blush - I felt like I was peeking. Thi story has managed to make me blush several times - me the seasoned reader of naughty stuff. Very good scene there.
person kylee123
schedule July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Leonin is very sexy!
person kylee123
schedule July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Laevi. Leonin is playing cat and mouse with poor Siarl. These two are super hot together. I saw the picture of Pryce. That is very much how I imagined him. I am looking forward to reading more.
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You have sent me into a fit of giggles. I can't wait to meet the new guy! Poppa is so very bad.
person kylee123
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Rolling on the floor! OMG! Big Poppa is at it again! I guess he is so happy that he needs to spread the love. I think he should dress up as cupid for the party. It is too bad that it did not work out for Siarl and Jean. I am glad that they will still be friends though. I guess Jean will have his hands full with Pryce. I love him so much. I can't wait to meet Leonin.