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Man, I'm glad you have anonymous reviews enabled. It really sucks when people, especially those specifically ASKING for reviews, don't have anon reviews enabled so there's no way for me to tell them what I think, or even tell them to enable anonymous reviews. >M

Anyways, I really like your story so far, it definitely has potential. C: I agree with the fact that you need to add more description, and maybe explain what you mean by metallic blue. I mean, do you mean a silvery color tinged with blue? Or do you mean a deep blue with a metallic edge?

Well, I hope you update soon! :D

-Rot

what a great Canada day present =) love your work so far. love wolves have read many many stories involoving them...like your 3 day challange, marking determning your destny and well your characters and the whole concept... looking forward to more of your work =)

Well...

I love how you started this off, the dream sequence throws you right into the world of a wolf. And this is the first time I've ever read a story about humanoid type characters so I cant wait to see what that would be like. Great description of the 'playing with himself' scene. I love that you didn't shy away from the nitty gritty of it as other authors would have. Gosh your chapters leave so many questions, there so much I want to know about the people in this fictional world. In the works of Dakota "pweety pwease" post more soon so I can get just a few questions answered.

It's no fair cuz I'm currently sitting in your room right now reading this off YOUR laptop and the future chapters are right there for me to read in your word documents but you wont let me :(

However, I'd be willing to start an auction from your readers. Whosoever would like a spoiler copy of the next chapter lemme know and I'll find a way into her room when she's not here to get them :) I accept payment in candies and things of the sort.

xoxo kokolocomotion

great start can't wait for the next chapter,

Great story so far !
Wait for more XDD

Hi again, another awesome chapter. I am hooked. Your story is totally amazing.
I think Tatum is soooo cute and adorable. I am so happy when I found you had posted another chapter. Please keep them rolling. This is slightly different from other wolf stories I've read and I really, really am enjoying it. Thanks for sharing their world with us.

Wow, great story so far! Really interesting concept and I like how you have set up the society and the trials... I'm a BIT confused about their apperance, though... do they look like "furries" with wolve's heads, as you write about them having fur, or do they look like humans, with wolves ears (because ears were drooping at one point) I'm sorry if you had a description, it's rather late here and I've been almost trying to force myself to stay awake to finish, because I didn't wanna stop... so, yeah, might have missed it, so I'm going to browse through it again... but tomorrow, because right now I need to sleeeeeeep... ;)

Hi again! Okay, couldn't stay away, and now I saw in the A/N of chapter two that you had answered a reader about the apperance of the characters, and that you wanted to put off the description for a while... I would rethink that if I were you, and maybe rewrite the first chapter at a later date, because as a reader one wants to be able to picture the character, and it's even more important in the anthro-world... more so than haircolor and markings... it's hard to see that if you don't know if the guy you are reading about looks human at all, if he has a snout or a human face, for example... and that's very important if you want your readers to connect to your characters... you have the right idea about not overloading on details, but he IS looking in the mirror in the beginning, and just a few extra words there would clear a whole lot up...
All the best!
/W

Oh God, after the last chapter with the phone call and Tatum having a little "problem" afterwards I thought he didn't know what to do with "it" o__o Proved me wrong haha! XD God im such a dork, but the description was along the lines of "My lower bits felt funny" that I thought of him as (mentally) being a kid! Jeeez, Glad to know im good for a laugh, and yeah once I read their names right I enjoyed them lol
It's really funny b/c i had a dog named Dakota :p
Thanks for another chappi hun! I thought it moved a little fast but other than that I enjoyed it and look forward to more! ~Passing Reader

Wow! Two chapters in one day! That's awesome! Though as i was reading I was kinda getting confused as to what the characters look like. Are they human or like half wolf like all the time? Just wondering...but awesome story! Hope the reviews can keep you writing!