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July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, hun. I liked both new chapters a lot, but you've got too many errors (spelling, mostly, but a few grammatical) for me to squeeze into this review, lol. If you send it to me at poetic_justice_served@hotmail.co.uk I'll be happy to return it to you corrected, though. It's up to you, obviously, and don't forget to let me know when you update! Thanks for reviewing "Inamorato" again!
~ FA
~ FA
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July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your story sounds interesting so far. I'm really curious about the challange and how is it going to work for Tatum. I'm eager to read more.
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July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm.Ace and Kable seems to have both caught Tatum's attend though he's never really met the alpha. I'm very intrigued about the whole challenge thing, but I'm even more interested in how Tatum is going to handle the two dominant wolves that I think will go after him. Will there been even more? who knows? I get all excited.lol. great job! can't wait for more! :)
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay you have me hooked and I am really looking forward to the next chapter. But I have one request please seperate the paragraphs a little...chapter 3 was hard to read with that long chapter. And I would love to be on your e-mail list.... savannah1974@windstream.net
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Tatum is sure in for a lot of surprises- Poor guy finding out you like other guys in front of family- more please!
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes, tere you go, now I have a clearer picture! ;) Nice chapter, I liked the Ace-caracther, it will add a bit of rivalry, wich is always interesting... can't wait for them to meet face t face, though... I'm expecting sparks! ;)
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
strange title for a were fic.
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Is it wrong that I imagine Tatum with Jacob Black's body? I don't even like Twilight, and I don't know much about Anthros, but that's what I see. T___T
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July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love your story and can't wait until the next chapter but the last paragraph in chapter 3 was really long and difficult to read. You should probably go back and fix it so it can be easier to read. Hope you update soon.
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July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. I loved the conference call scene. Just the perfect touch of humor. I am really looking forward to the next chapter.