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Hi, I love you're story and am anxious for updates. Please keep it going.
I really like wolf stories so much. I just wanted to mention one little thing, please don't get mad at me. I noticed you use Tristian (who is Tatums' father)in the story description. Shouldn't it be Tatum? I can't wait to see when Tatum meets up with Kable in person for the first time.

Thanks for sharing such a wonderful story and it is very well written too.

I really like this! Hope you update again soon! XD

This is pretty. A wonderful start and I think that you have the beginnings of an awesome and compelling story.

Awww...that was quite a good beginning! The only thing I think is a bit weird is the anthropomorphic wolves, but that's just a personal preference on my part! You need a bit of editing work, but that's quite normal. I'm sure you'll catch a typo or two in my story from time to time! My biggest suggest to you (as a fellow author, and one with a literary agent and hopefully soon a publisher) is that you remember to ensure your characters are ROUND, and not FLAT.

What I mean by that is, if I were to ask you what Demi's favorite color is, you should be able to answer without hesitation. The same goes if I asked Tristan's favorite song...or Gabe's favorite food. You need to make them into PEOPLE, not characters. When your characters start doing things on their own - things you would never DREAM of doing, or having them do - you know they've gotten a life of their own. That's the true mark of a good author!

Your work shows a lot of promise and I look forward to reading more. Feel free to let me know in your reviews of "Inamorato" when you've updated this; I promise to read it when you do! ~ FallenAngel

Very interesting story. It caught my attention only because I love wolves so much. Can't wait to read more.

Love the two chapters so far! Thank you for updating so quickly as well! And i definitely can't wait until they finally meet. Also, I'm a little confused about why Gabe knew more about what would be happening when they go, but Tatum didn't, or thought something different.

Can't wait for the next chapter :)

the story is awesome, please update soon and i am looking forward for the next chapter!

Tatum is in for a surprise. Why didn't his parents tell him the success ratio- why didnt his grandmother talk to him more about markings, or did they talk to him and he didnt hear? Look forward to more