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i love ur story ..i like wolves alot
i love ur writing style easy and smooth
plz one chapter is not enough put another one plz and make it long

Nice start. I would like to see next chapter soon.

be sweet and put another chapter u can't just feed us alittle when we are hungry right that well be unfair u know
so u have to post a couple of chapters to even it

Looking forward to when they finally meet!

Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com

I like how the story's starting! You've got just the right mix of background, character development, and intrigue as to what will happen next. I'm a big fan of mating-type stories, so I'm really looking forward to reading the rest! You may wish to add a bit more physical description of how everyone looks (how human the body structure is/how wolf-ish the body structure is) and consider being a tad bit more descriptive with the physical environment and world these creatures live in. You did an excellent job with describing details, but the society/world being lived in is unclear (both physically and socially; are there other types of animals? What's the class structure? You hinted at a construction job and schools and this pack being well-off, so what about everyone else?)

Can't wait for the next update! Update soon please :) -Jolene

I really like it. it's interesting, please update as soon as you can!

Ok I'm loving your story ..please continue writing ...

I kept reading Tatum's name as Tantrum haha XD It was only after the third time when i was like, waaait...lol
I find the story so far to be really cute! I keep picturing Tatum at his challenge catching this huge buck, but because he's so slim he can't drag it home lol Can't wait to see more, thx for sharing hun! ~Passing Reader

love the beginning!!!!!

!!! Totally awesome first chapter!!! I cannot wait for the next one and i hope it comes out soon!!! Great job, and keep writing! :)