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July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Finally I had some time to finish this amazing story!!!! Thank you, btw, for the shout-out! Oh, and Exer, I could NEVER forget Lucas and David; I followed that story (and all your others) and loved each and every one! I tried to contact you a few times, months after you stopped updating. I went into you blog and emailed you a few times, but never got any response. So I am THRILLED you're still writing!!! :)
I find I'm loving this story even more, even tho I pretty much remember what's going to happen next! I love the bantering between Lucas and David and even Anna.
I did notice tho, that there are quite a few typos, and unfinished words and sentences that don't start w/a capital letter. If you want an extra set of eyes to go over the chapter before you post it, I'd be more than willing to look it over. Sometimes an extra pair of eyes (ok, maybe 8 extra! :)) helps. I do proof a few stories on here and it would be my pleasure to proof this one also, (this is one of my all time favorites) if you want. You can email me at LisaT25@msn.com if you're interested. If not, no big deal, I just wanted to throw that out there.
Anyway, great job and I can't wait for the next update! Have a great July 4th everyone!
I find I'm loving this story even more, even tho I pretty much remember what's going to happen next! I love the bantering between Lucas and David and even Anna.
I did notice tho, that there are quite a few typos, and unfinished words and sentences that don't start w/a capital letter. If you want an extra set of eyes to go over the chapter before you post it, I'd be more than willing to look it over. Sometimes an extra pair of eyes (ok, maybe 8 extra! :)) helps. I do proof a few stories on here and it would be my pleasure to proof this one also, (this is one of my all time favorites) if you want. You can email me at LisaT25@msn.com if you're interested. If not, no big deal, I just wanted to throw that out there.
Anyway, great job and I can't wait for the next update! Have a great July 4th everyone!
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July 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Jesus Christ! I couldn't get on my computer at all today!!!! You know how cranky that makes me!!!! Very cranky!! I needed my David and Lucas fix! lol
Well, I only had time for the first chapter! Awesome rewrite, btw! There were a few typos, but no biggies. Excellent chapter and I loved reading all about David and Lucas again! I missed those boys! Altho I still have a problem w/the whole David smoking bit, but I guess you guys think it needs to be a part of him and his personality. I just think how bad he must smell all the time! :)
Anyway...can't wait to read ch. 2, hopefully I can get through it now before I'm called away!
I'm so glad you guys are back!!!
Well, I only had time for the first chapter! Awesome rewrite, btw! There were a few typos, but no biggies. Excellent chapter and I loved reading all about David and Lucas again! I missed those boys! Altho I still have a problem w/the whole David smoking bit, but I guess you guys think it needs to be a part of him and his personality. I just think how bad he must smell all the time! :)
Anyway...can't wait to read ch. 2, hopefully I can get through it now before I'm called away!
I'm so glad you guys are back!!!
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June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMGOSH!! I'm so happy your back!! I've kept up with all the three stories I'm so glad you guys finally are going to complete it! although i hope it's a happy ending = ( after all those two have been through...and there won't be any deaths right?...lol sorry I know I'm probably just overeacting XD...I just love this story alot.. I cried when they broke up hehe...i'm a big baby...anywho good luck with the rewrite! I'll support you!! <3