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for .Smitten Kitten

by keithcompany

schedule July 31, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This is a good story.  A few typos here and there and at times the humans' lisping speech is a little difficult to parse, but it does  convey the idea that their pronunciations of the Alians' language is difficult for humans.

schedule January 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Absolutely delightful story. Well done. Xoxo Robin

person Cam
schedule December 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really hope this isn't awkward but I just had to say- I've never been so pulled in and turned on by a story... ever. It was also pretty well written and didn't drag on- it seemed to run a natural course as far as the plot goes. So top ratings! :]
person HypnoticPoison
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh!!!! How can that be the end?!?!?! ='( I'd be miserable in Kitten's position!!
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That's it? 0_0
person Sonyasha
schedule August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
NNOOOOO dont end it there!! This is such a good story, theres so much that can still go on.
person Anon
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Been sick lately so very busy sleeping in every moment not at work but WOOT! Its coming along amazingly! She's beginning to see the effects of what he saved her from and learning so much more about herself! Can't wait to see what comes next you seem to be on a roll doubling the number of chapters already!!!
schedule August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story I just finished reading the 12 chapters it's really good and I like the plot and the characters =)
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this chapter made me laugh, especially at the end! So what's going to happen here? Is he going to try and get intimate with her? Or maybe make her grow bigger (if that is even possible?) either way I am super excited for what ever you have next, so keep it up! :D
person HypnoticPoison
schedule August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LMAO. I loved the way this chaper ended! Too funny!! I can't wait to see how the explination goes... Or the next jump either!! ]=}> I am eagerly awaiting the next update!!!