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August 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update! the world you've created with the depth of your character's persona is so vivid and interesting that I can't wait for you to update! please update!
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July 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting world and story so far. I think I'm starting to get the hang of the native words and it's really well written, so I'm hoping it will continue soon! Not only because I'm curious, but because if it takes too long between updates in a story like this you forget the words and details, and re-reading /remembering becomes too much of a bother... that's the downsida of a complicated story, although hopefully not a problem with this one... happy writing!
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June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, fascinating start so far. Your story seems to have a well fleshed-out world and it'll be really interesting to see where things go from here. Looking forward to the next chapter!
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June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very innovative, interesting story. I look forward to reading more of it.
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June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say, though this is a bit simplistic in the description, I find myself really interested in this. There are some signs that you haven't written in a while, but still the characters are interesting. I feel myself more rawn to Nanay than Suen, but that seems a little pointless. Regardless, I enjoyed this first chapter and really hope you try to continue this.
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June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this, I can't wait to read more. I'm hooked!
Thank you for explaining at the beginning, I would have been confused otherwise =)
I look forward to more, and you don't call this serious stuff. . . pfft! =D
Thank you for explaining at the beginning, I would have been confused otherwise =)
I look forward to more, and you don't call this serious stuff. . . pfft! =D
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June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far. You have a complex world that I can't wait to discover more about. I hope you update again!
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June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I love the story! Hope to see more soon!!
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June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good start cant wait for more, and i didnt see much in the way of errors