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for Neon-Genesis

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person kippenka
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
*immediately opens up a review tab* Pssh. I could never hate you. That's an amusing thought, though. And, even if I said I wanted to know, you wouldn't tell me. D: *starts reading* Hm. I'm getting used to not mentally replacing "Sininon" with "Sinnoh". Although, now I keep replacing it with "Shinon". *facepalms at self* Man, I keep seeing some of my favorite words lately. First "chortling" and now "bemused". I'm just waiting for someone to use a form of "masticate".

...NGE merged with Final Fantasy VIII. That's...an interesting thought. And I don't like you any less. Possibly more, because you've successfully distracted me from writing. x'D (Wow. The CAPTCHA for this review is/was "have bribe". XD)
person kippenka
schedule June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oAo How did I miss this story? *smacks self*

Anywho. This is really interesting so far. (I think I may sound like a broken record, 'cause I'm pretty sure I said that last time...and the time before that as well. x'D) Kit--can I call her Kit?--reminds me of someone, either myself or one of my older characters. Either way, I like her. *nods*
person kippenka
schedule June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man. I swear that said "In the Sinnoh region" at first. *facepalms at self* But, man. Experimentation? As in, genetic experimentation? 'v' *loves some good genetic experimentation* Now you have me all excited as I wait for the next chapter. I hope you're happy now that you've done that.
schedule June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Eek, I'm a little freaked by the experimenting... What if the experiments turn out to look like the cannibals in the film Wrong Turn? >.< No likey! Erm, anyway, Kitsune's a cute little character, and I'm calling her a supahero now. :)
schedule June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So did Genesis die then? Did Neon escape from that experimentation place? Why do animals just cling to her like that? XD Hehe, keep it coming! :)
person kippenka
schedule June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow. My brain totally started to take things the wrong way when it was Genesis' special thingo was revealed. I was snickering, and then I stopped myself 'cause I was taking things out of context accidentally. And then, and then, when it was at the end of the flashback, and the guy was like, "You need to eat more. *FROWN*" (at least, I imagined him frowning a little), my immediate thought was, "Don't eat the food! It's drugged!" x'D
schedule June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well this is interesting. She's like a supahero! ;) Haha, I want to see where you take this.

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