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I am eagerly anticipating more and I really like where the story is going so far, keep up the good work! ^^b

xD Mastication is good for the digestive system. And for just trying to get things down period. I imagine it'd be hard to swallow a piece of pizza without chewing it first (as well as taking bites of it instead of just shoving it all in your mouth). Ah. When you put “She would do anything that would hurt us Terry", I think you meant to say 'she wouldn't do anything that would hurt us'. Doesn't make sense otherwise. x'D *gasps* The cat! It's like a feline form of Lassie! XD "What's that, Terra? Kit's in the park?" xD Sorry. Kinda tired and yet hyped up at the same time.

;n; Dat ending. It got rid of my happy real quick, that it did. Can't wait to read more, though. 83

Oh, poor Kit... :( I really am liking this story now. I mean, I liked it before, but now there's so much conflict and it's kind of gnawing at me how I really want Kit and Reena to make hot&passionate love. ...whoa, did I just type that out? xD Ahem, yes... ;) I can't wait for the next update!

You just keep poppin' them out, don'tcha? ;p That's good, though! Means your creative juices are flowing. Talking to plants? Cool! That would be very helpful now that I think about it. So is that one experiment going to give the creepy doctor a hard-on and make him forget about coming after Kit? I'm thinking not, at least about the forgetting.

ps - I agree with the good doctor. XD Neon and Genesis need to get back to business, if you know what I mean... ;D

When you get a block you get a new project? I wish my blocks were like that; 'cause when I get a block, I just don't write while getting pangs of guilt for not writing. "It was like watching a balloon deflate itself then start to re-inflate" gave me a chuckle when I actually pictured that.

OHMYGODYES! *rolls with laughter* That just made my day. Honestly. *bows to your awesomeness* Oh, god. Seeing you use "masticate" just...it put such a huge grin on my face and made me so happy that I could just--well, I could probably finish up part VI of Nightlife Blues. It also brought back memories of when one of my good friends introduced me to the word. Oh, man. That was a fun couple days.

*sniffs* And now a good portion of that happy is gone 'cause of the last scene. But, it's all good, 'cause you're awesome, and you made my day.

Aw, they sure are cute together. That doctor seems to want Kitsune really bad... and it's kind of creeping me out, to tell you the truth. Keep it up, hun. :)

T-two chapters in one day!? *sniffles in happiness*

It was a nice chapter--yay, moar backstory! Although, now I'm craving breakfast foods. D':

Eh. Short chapters, long chapters. I like them both. Don't know about everyone else, though.

And, I must say. The title already has me thinking of Neon Genesis Evangelion, but the last sentence made me go, "ASUKA!?" No joke.

O: Dat ending. xD My jaw dropped a little bit. *never sees anything coming unless it's over-the-top obvious*

And, I have to wonder why only Reena/Genesis worked with Neon's DNA. Is it...because they love each other?! *cackles like an idiot* Also, pssh. Suuuuurrreee you didn't mean to make me think of NGE. *stares in mock suspicion*

Well Genesis obviously isn't dead. XD The ending of the last chapter was very cute and emotional. I'm glad Kitsune is going with them to wherever they're going. They seem to have some, erm, making-up to do. ;)