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this story is one that i have gotten in to. i read it in a day and love it so far. hope that u wright more. ur a really good wrighter and alot different from the others, i wright about the conection people have and not just the sex. i really love this story and want to read more.

Wait. Wait wait wait. Did she just leave Reena there...?

... I don't even know what to say. @.@

Oh, wow. When it was in the present, I kept thinking of Charlie doing something like that for Hannah. O3o; And then, the ending made my jaw drop--if not unhinge a little--at what happened. My thoughts were something like, "WHAT?! DID THAT SERIOUSLY JUST HAPPEN!? *jaw continues to drop and eyes are glued to screen*" And now, I really can't wait for the next chapter. Maybe I'll get to see Reena's reaction to what Kit did. *crosses fingers*

*uses makeshift shield to block thrown rotting fruit*

It's okay to take a break, everyone needs one from time to time.

I like her reasoning for not using precognition and telepathy, it makes sense.

Keep it up! ^^b

Whoa man... I'm not sure what to say. I don't blame her for doing it... but I just hope she stays alive! D:

Hey, sex isn't everything, I think you're doing just great as is. I loved the new information... I think I can see how her escape is gonna go down. Looking forward to more, and keep it up!

So, so, that very last line made me go, "Wait, WHAT? What? What?" and stare at my screen, jaw nearly hitting the floor with how wide it's open. I think I must have read the last few lines a few times 'cause my brain was just reeling from what happened. Gotta love cliffhangers, eh? But, man. I really wanna read what happens next now. .^.

D8 I forgot to say which one it was; my bad. And now I can't remember which song it was. I know who the artist is, but I can't remember which song. *cries in frustration* Although, upon listening to one of my favorite new songs, I think it might have been "The World Outside" by Eyes Set To Kill. *continues to investigate this*

But, damn. Things are certainly heating up, aren't they? And quite literally, too. Simion really pushes all my bad buttons, though. I'm hoping he meets a gruesome death. Mayhaps a painful one as well, although would that be pushing it too far? Nah. Gruesome, painful, slow--now that might be pushing it too far. Oh, uh, anyway. *nervously looks around while changing subject* I'm pretty excited to read the next chapter.

Heh, that's like how I feel. I generally think that my writing's not good at all, and it's pretty hard to shake even when people tell me otherwise. Although because I have the hope and belief that at least one person's reading it (for whatever reason), I continue writing my stuff, even if I don't feel like I can or question why I should continue. And then whenever I complete and chapter, look it over, and then post it, I'm always worried that no one's going to like it, that maybe I've overstepped myself with that chapter. It's not good for the nerves at all--nor the confidence or ego.

Ah, but your stuff's great. Don't let anyone tell you otherwise, not even yourself.

And, my oh my, things really are getting interesting, as the good doctor almost exactly said. After reading these latest two chapters, you've now got me wanting more. I kind of feel like a dog who has a treat sitting on its nose but can't eat it just yet. Well, maybe note quite like that, but pretty much the same way. I eagerly wait for more.

Ah yes, very interesting indeed. Excellent work as I'm learning to expect from you, You are a very talented writer. I'm looking forward to more from you. ^^b

Also I'm glad my screen name amuses you, I'm particularly fond of it. xD