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"Please", she said, "no more. Please. Either you do it or leave me alone. But please, stop teasing me." Well? No more? This is interesting and I'd love it if you continued posting. You haven't decided to stop it, have you? It's sexy and cute at the same time, Adara is a smartass xD And poor little Mina... What a dear. Please post more soon!

Ohoho~ What a nice way to start the afternoon. Can't wait to read more. *w*

I like this. It definitely wants me to read more.

You just...You just can't leave me hanging here! I mean, that's just...AUGHK.

But, does Mina go after the other girl? She has to, right? Well, maybe not "has to", but...whatever. Hopefully you'll continue this soon.

Is that it? Oh, that can't be it? That was a very sexy scene. I hope you write more.

this is a good start. i hope you continue it