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by GreenRain

person Doppelganger
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think the general idea sounds interesting...but I'm so confused because nothing has really been explained about the characters yet, and there wasn't enough descriptions or anything for me :s
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it... The story has a lot of potential... The problem I have was the scene wasn't set and the characteers weren't described and I kinda got a bit confused... But overall I thought it was brilliant and I am looking forward to reading more.

Io_non_ha_paura
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I love it! It's pretty original and to have actual fangirls and fanboys in it, is hysterical!

Can't wait to read the next chapter!