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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh God! Max is great! It's like he's one step ahead of Daniel. Poor Daniel; I can certainly see that he does not know one thing about socialization! hahaha
The banter between Max and Daniel is great; Daniel can't get ahead of Max's retorts!
I can't wait to see how they do in the movie!
The banter between Max and Daniel is great; Daniel can't get ahead of Max's retorts!
I can't wait to see how they do in the movie!
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June 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start. I'll be waiting for more. ;)
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June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. Its been a long time since I've read something this interesting. Great job, hope to read the next chapter soon.
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh man....SO GOOD! I can;t wait for more soon hopefully!!!
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ouuuuh I like it!
I thought the exact same thing, I was all like "You didn't give him your number!!", lol.
This first chapie is quite entertaining and it makes you also eager to read the next one! Anyway, I'm looking forward to it for sure!
I thought the exact same thing, I was all like "You didn't give him your number!!", lol.
This first chapie is quite entertaining and it makes you also eager to read the next one! Anyway, I'm looking forward to it for sure!
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit that I bypassed this story at first when I saw it, but I figured, eh, why not try it?.....And I'm so glad I did! I'm hooked already and it's only one chapter long. I love Daniels' personality and can't wait to read what he thinks next =P I hope to read more soon!
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, love it so far! Great start! Daniel is such a stick-in-the-mud, nasty guy; I hope Max puts a smile on his face! lol
Can't wait for the next update!
Can't wait for the next update!
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June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap!!!! I just went into your profile and realized YOU'RE THE ONE W/THE DESERT STORY!!!!!! I was just thinking of this story today!!!!!! You HAVE TO UPDATE IT SOON!!!! What happened? For awhile you were updating every few days and it's been awhile and nothing.
Anyway, I hope you update it soon; it's a GREAT story!
Anyway, I hope you update it soon; it's a GREAT story!