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for Daniel and Max

by Supporttherainbow

schedule August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I wanna be part of the mailing address for this story! I love it so much. mdevries08@yahoo.com
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is just awesome. It's really fun to read and I can't stop giggling at how cute Daniel really is even tho he's such a little sourpuss! I can't wait for the next update and I hope it comes soon!
person Chrysler
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Daniel is quiet a character. I mean, I know it must suck being a short guy, but besides being short, why does Daniel have something against the world? Is it just because he's hateful by nature or something happened? Anyway, I'm glad he ran into Max. He seems really chill already. It's not like he's going to fight Daniel to change, but already he's getting the already fiesty man to relax. i also like their differences-age wise, personality, nationality, and definitely the height. haha. It's going to be a tough ride, but I'm more than eager so see how Max deals with Daniel and breaks through his walls.
person kylee123
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the first date. I thought they would end the evening with some nice making out. The three gorillas should have said hello when they sat down in the theatre. Daniel is quite the multilayered onion. Poor Max is going to have a hard time figuring him out. Max needs to realize that Daniel is always going to find something to get upset about since he is the pouty type.
person Chrysler
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahha I really liked this line: I was looking at my phone like it had grown a tiny little dick and started to swing it around while singing ‘Somewhere Over The Rainbow’.

Now tell me…How are Angelo and Daniel friends? It just baffles me a little, but they’re entertaining none the less. And I hope we learn more about Angelo and Sam…such hunks! Mac and Daniel…gah, that boy is putty in his hands. Hahah. Anyway, I know this isn’t relevant at all, but where are you from? You use words like “sack” and “ring” and it sounds slightly like proper English. Anyhow, I can’t possibly love Max and Daniel anymore than I already do.
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like this. :) Especially, the Daniel character.
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE Adam Sandler!!!! Ok, just had to get that off my chest!

And I won't pay for my own torment. Hahaha, funny line! And omg, It must be a tumor. Daniel is so funny he doesn't even know it.

Ok, I didn't get the "thanks for the three tickets" either, until I realized Max gave those guys the tickets b/c the seats would prevent Daniel from seeing the screen. Therefore, Daniel would have to sit in his lap? That is pretty fucked up. But it worked, I guess.

Good chapter, looking forward to the next one! I really like Max; he's not put off at all by Daniel's arrogant attitude.
schedule July 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yes! This is adorable! I love the height difference! It's a secret kind of kink of mine (I'm a 5'8" woman dating a 5'2" man). I like the kind of reversal with Daniel being older, yet shorter. Max sounds adorable and I also have a dimple fetish so that was incredibly enjoyable. I look forward to seeing how their relationship progresses, to learn more about Max, and for Daniel to open up to him.
person Anon
schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!
ASOTA
person kylee123
schedule July 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. This story is so sweet and funny. i love the characters. I love the kissing. Daniel does not stand a chance against Max. He is already putty in his hands. I am so excited to see what happens on their date. Update soon please. I love both of your stories.