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for Daniel and Max

by Supporttherainbow

schedule January 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, could Daniel actually be "feeling" something for Max? lol

Nice chapter; I'm glad you updated. Another poke, poke for Desert Wind, pretty please????? :)
schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow. loved the chapter.. and of course loved max as well
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Angelo really fucked up this time.

But Daniel, yeah, definitely NOT relationship savvy! lol

But funny as all hell; I LOVE the way he thinks, omg, ...it would have been promlematic jumping over his rotting corpse every time I wanted to go out that is. That was hysterical!!! And just the way he thinks and the things he says, he is priceless!

And I thought for sure Max was gonna deck Daniel's brother; what an insulting ass he is! Daniel should show up at his wedding with Max, now THAT would be something!
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow.....awesome work! Seems the 2 lovebirds can't catch a break from all the drama!
person Roachy64
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story more and more! Daniel is one of a kind but so funny. His thoughts are wicked and scarky but hilarious. Liking your writing style alot.
Jenny
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Daniel, with friends like that...who needs enemas? Xd I like Max, he's insouciant.
person kylee123
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Daniel is so grumpy. I think things would have gone a lot better if he had just let Max do him up one more time before he left for classes. Then he would'nt need to take out all his frustrations on poor Angelo. he should have told his brother to fuck off.
person lucmaria
schedule August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
waah sex scene...hot...hot..hot.....moreeee.....
person patrysza
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story :> keep it up
schedule August 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was very good! This smex had it's own interesting atmosphere so the charm is definitely on!
Love this story, not a conventional one, can't wait for next chapter! :*