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December 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love grumpy guys. I love short guys. I ADORE shorty grumpy guys. I also have a thing for big guys that come across as eager lost puppies. Needless to say, based on those facts alone this story was a sure thing for me. Add to that a great sense of snarky humor, rich character development all around, and the smooth/easy to read style of writing, and this story was a shoo-in for a 5+ rating for me. What a pleasant way to spend a day at the office while pretending to be busy. I look forward to reading your other pieces!
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October 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awwwww that was really cute lol. i love how daniel shouted that out loud!! please continue soon!
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March 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story its fantastic and I want Daniel to be my new BFF he all types of crazy and I love it update soon.
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Haha, I thought you were talking about the girl who does a remake of "Crocodile Rock". I can't believe he's letting people record his songs. No one can compare to Sir Elton.
Ok, on to the review: OMFG, I almost spewed my iced tea all over the keyboard when Daniel wound up screaming when the music shut off! Shit that was hysterical! Poor Daniel; it seems like he's getting used to being embarrassed! lol
Loved this chapter; can't wait for the next one! :)
Ok, on to the review: OMFG, I almost spewed my iced tea all over the keyboard when Daniel wound up screaming when the music shut off! Shit that was hysterical! Poor Daniel; it seems like he's getting used to being embarrassed! lol
Loved this chapter; can't wait for the next one! :)
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh man whats wrong with the format? i hope your able to fix this soon! All the luck!!!
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
O M G I freaking luv u at the moment. I really love this story and will be super sad when it ends but gaw i laughed and laughed when the music stopped. Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter!
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
awww this was an awesome chap as usual!!;) finally angelo and dan made up! can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
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February 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so far and I can't wait to read more!
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January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hi Udine
You're back, hoorah!! Hope you are well. I missed Max & Daniel heaps, I was worried they wouldn't be able to finish their journey and what a trip they're having. Poor Max he really cares for Daniel but he needs to remember Daniel isn't a young carefree boy, he's...... Daniel with his cute/frustrating hang ups LOL! What I love about your writing is the little things you add that make me think yeah so true ie the kissing upside down thing, I laughed out loud at that one.
So glad your back and you talent at writing such warm, funny, angsty (excuse spelling) downright hilarious and real emotional worries has not been affected. Keep up the great work.
Jen
You're back, hoorah!! Hope you are well. I missed Max & Daniel heaps, I was worried they wouldn't be able to finish their journey and what a trip they're having. Poor Max he really cares for Daniel but he needs to remember Daniel isn't a young carefree boy, he's...... Daniel with his cute/frustrating hang ups LOL! What I love about your writing is the little things you add that make me think yeah so true ie the kissing upside down thing, I laughed out loud at that one.
So glad your back and you talent at writing such warm, funny, angsty (excuse spelling) downright hilarious and real emotional worries has not been affected. Keep up the great work.
Jen
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January 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Spiderman lies! Too funny!
And Daniel APOLOGIZED????? Did I read that correctly? lol He's getting more of a conscience; I think Max is rubbing off on him (no pun intended!).
Great chapter; looking forward to reading about the party! :)
And Daniel APOLOGIZED????? Did I read that correctly? lol He's getting more of a conscience; I think Max is rubbing off on him (no pun intended!).
Great chapter; looking forward to reading about the party! :)