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July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
An excellent story overall, good plotline & characterizations.
The only jarring notes were the many Very short chapters, some only a couple paragraphs long. It was jarring enough I had to copy/paste all the chapters together into a single txt file on my computerin order to read it smoothly.
The only jarring notes were the many Very short chapters, some only a couple paragraphs long. It was jarring enough I had to copy/paste all the chapters together into a single txt file on my computerin order to read it smoothly.