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for Nightlife Blues

by kippenka

schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i have to admit i looked like a total geek the moment i opened the 'latest' page and saw your story at the top. *throws hands in the air for added effect* and as soon as i read the first line, i just had to smile. scratch that, Grin!! XD i loved it. and jennifer. dear sweet jennifer, how i love you so XDDD. she sounds almost as manipulative as me when i'm ready (which is often). the fact that she seems to be able to read and control annie's thoughts had me down right laughing till i had tears in my eyes. i love it.

Update as soon as you can hun!! XD
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schedule June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So far......I'm liking the story and the characters. I'm really looking forward to where this story will go.
schedule June 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
For some inexplicable reason i find myself loving Jeniffer. great two chapters, and i love Annie's inner dialog. i found myself laughing a lot while i read. keep it up >.<