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for Nightlife Blues

by kippenka

person RWO
schedule September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I will be dropping in at intervals to see if the hiatus on this one is over. :)
person Celery22
schedule August 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Alright so, Damien is very confusing. Beyond that I love the name choice, Damien is pretty much the best male name ever in my opinion.

I can't wait for more so we can get this all explained.

Great work. Keep it up. ^^b
schedule August 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
still reading, still reviewing, and waiting patiently for the next update.

nyaa, keep it up XD (i don't really have much to say, apart from the fact that i really liked this chapter.)
person Celery22
schedule July 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
T.T weeks for more? Ibdunno if I can last that long, this story is really great. Can't wait for more, really.
person tscecest
schedule July 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is quite good, really. The setting's a tad bit odd, since I can't tell if werewolves, vampires, mutants, or whatever the hell Annie's supposed to be is common knowledge or what, but it's interesting. I have plenty of questions to ask, but I assume that they'll be answered in the future.

I hope to see more from you.
schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nyaaa!!! i liked this chapter!! you 'god-moded' annie!! classic!! i look forward to that chapter in the making!!! XD

Keep it up!
person A2Carter
schedule June 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Update! XD You're actually getting me all exited here Oo
Nice twist, curious about the explainations as to how J got int rouble with a vampire of all things *lol*
Anyway, my hat to you, you might think you're slow, but I can't believe you qrite that much though you're a student *is a student too and only finds time to read* oo
schedule June 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nyaaa. i loved how she woke up... XD i laughed. i imagined jeniffer's sleepy face to be all like 'i don't wanna get up geeze don't wake me up... *groan, powers activate* chill out a bit' XD but seriously... i want you to continue this story as you get time. please, i like it... 8)
person Anon
schedule June 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wah! A cliff hanger on chapter 4!

I don't normally read F/F stories, but I love this! You've done very well creating characters each with their own personality, and I especially loved Jennifers view on the world at the beginning, lol. 'My real passion in life was making things go boom!' - her sarcastic personality is is very enjoyable to read about.

thanks very much for the updates. Looking forward tomore.
person A2Carter
schedule June 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, there stumbled onto your fic just this week, and you've already updated twice: Awesome! XD
Gotta say I love your story so far, though I hope J. will do sth other than stalk and manipulate Annie now and then (hobby, uni, work?), maybe drag her somewhere she likes or whatever. Possibly because I can really relate with Annie being all passive... oo
Either way, the update totally made my day and though I'm not sure if I'll review regulary, I'll definitly keep reading this fic and hope you update soon ^^
PS: As for your fear of moving too fast, I can see that what with Jennifer already moving in, but oh well: On this page it's a gem, in other fics they'd probably already have had sex etc. Your pace seems to fit the characters so far, and with Jennifer seeming rather pushy and Annie being all reluctant this can either go really fast, medium or take an eternety so don't fret ;)