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I'm trying, I'm trying. I've got three pages done (or at least two and a half) but it's hard for some reason. I actually have to try and get the inspiration to come to me now, since it's not free flowing anymore. >A< I promise I'll try and write once I submit this review, however. Maybe Aliens will somehow give me inspiration. -,-

But, would this other wolf be the Demetri that was mentioned previously? Mayhaps the wolf from the cafe? Or, *gasp* could the two be one in the same!? I guess since you won't divulge the info and I don't like to be spoiled early, I'll just have to wait.

YES CHECK ON MARINA PLZ. :) That silly Mrs. Powers, what is her deal? I swear some people should not have pets. I'm curious to see if that male shows up again and tries something with Selena... Mm, keeping me on my toes! ;) Keep it up, babe!

Ack! No! The puppies! Maya has to be alright! Think of the puppies! ;A; Okay, think of the other dogs as well...and the cats, just in case.

Oh, I know that feeling of not being able to sleep because of inspiration. I think that's part of the reason why I couldn't go back to sleep tonight. *sighs* I have to get up early, too. (In about four hours, actually.)

I must say, though. That first line reminded me so much of Annie that I thought I honestly wouldn't be surprised if it was Jennifer who was trying to convince her to go clubbing. It gave me a good laugh, too. During the rant, I was trying not to laugh while picturing Marina's facial expression(s) during the whole thing. That's an interesting name, though: 'Wolf Wolfsbane'. As usual by now, can't wait for the next update, although hopefully you'll get more sleep before then. xD

Oh, they are so digging on each other! =D I love it! The name "Ookami" sounds so cool. I was having fun just saying it to my computer... but yeah, it's cool! ;) At that restaurant, I was thinking that something greater was going to go down -- not necessarily a fight but maybe some talking or Selena physically telling the guy to leave. And how she wanted Marina to really ask her about why she needed the ring was super "aww" to read. :)

She likes her, she likes her, woopa woopa woopa! XD

Kekekekeke.

I do believe I was grinning like an idiot while I was reading this chapter. I know I laughed at the part when Selena suddenly thought "Alphas protect", 'cause I suddenly thought of subliminal messaging. Donno why, but I did, and I laughed.

And, methinks that all my creativity and inspiration to write has left me to go to you. It's an odd feeling, to see your muse reject you for someone else. But, hey. Can't complain if I get to read more of your stuff, right?

What really tickles me is the fact that Selena had a horrible (and very well-written :)) nightmare, wakes up feeling like shit, and already has to deal with stalker Terra (XD) AND her last thought is about Marina. AWWW. I think that's wun-dee-ful! :D They had a wonderful little lunch there, too, didn't they? I wonder if Marina will try to get Selena to go clubbin' and punch some guy in the face! ...oh...wait... ;) I thought Marina was going to be a human ignorant of werewolves, but I guess not. At least now they have something else to talk about on their next date! ;D

XD Initially, I read it as /Marina/ licking her face, not Maya. I got a little excited at that but then I realized I read it wrong, lmao. But anyways, that darn lady hurting her cat, my god! I can't wait to see if they go to the club together (and they better ;D)! *waits patiently for update*

...I'm both scared and curious to know why someone would stick their cat's head in a tube while using lube to get it in there. I'll have to go with scared, though, and not ask or attempt to Google it. And, glad to see that my muse is being of use.

Hm. Sorry that this review is so...lacking. I can't think of anything to say. -3-;

Ohohoho~

This is really interesting so far. I've only heard of one Were that was a vet, and he died before anything was really going for him (although given the circumstances, it was fitting). He seemed like a nice background character before that, though. xD I really can't wait to read more.