rate_review Reviews

I must admit, I'm a little disappointed. I was hoping you'd drag it out a big more, and I'm only on chapter 5? I think. Around there. Now I'm wondering what the rest of the chapters are going to contain if it isn't the character buildup from realizing their own feelings and then figuring out each others and the process in which they get together.
It was all very rushed. :c

This story is so jokes. Some seriously hilarious lines, I'm laughing out loud. Usually I just breathe harder than normal through my nose.

on second thought (more like, on 50th thought), I was thinking who the hell calls their S.O. sweet potato? Like, that's actual food? That's like calling each other, say, pumpkin?
And then on third thought: ...oh. Carry on.

Haha man I've been away from this site for so long and I wasn't honestly expecting to find anything or anyone I know anymore, and here you are, still trucking. Makes me a bit nostalgic, almost. :) Erik's a drama queen and Alexis is a bit too sensible for his own good. Good to see that some things never change.

I think I have a telepathic connection with you! I was literally just thinking about this story recently! And I'm glad you chose to write a War and Peace on dicks! Keep 'em coming!!

I love it! No matter how much brainstorming I do after every new chapter about what might happen next - you always manage to surprise and delight me! Love your story, love your characters, love you! Keep on writing, please!

Omni! I'm sitting here cracking up! I wanted to re-familiarize myself with what happened in the last chapter, so I just reread it. What a pisser! The grandma was upset only b/c the guy was sixteen years older than Bunn? lol Omg!

There were so many funny lines - I loved rereading this. I didn't remember that Erik had come out to his mom. I remember him telling his two girl cousins though.

Ok, on to chapter 49...

Omg, this chapter was terrific! Kjell was only twenty-two! lol

And by the 38th, I mean the 40th! lol

You're on a roll, Omni! And only fifty more chapters to go! lol :)

Glorious - I am so glad there are no direct neighbours where I live! So it was only two visitors who came hurrying in when I screamed with laughter while reading your new chapter...
I really wonder what the genetic makeup of the Palme family might be like to have such different and weird and hilarious members... I hope there will be added many more chapters in the years to come while we follow Eric and Alexis while they grow older... and eventually even grow up... (And Flynn? Until now he seems to be the most normal member of the family - apart from his father's name - but I can't believe he will stay that way...)
Thank you for sharing!

Aww I was actually starting to feel kinda bad for Erik's mom cuz she is a crazy lady but kinda lovable! I hope we find out more about the baby daddy and she can finally have a bit if romance lolz! Like these speedy updates btw!! Keep 'em coming!