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for It's Your Fault I'm Like This

by OmnipotentDespot

person sebbie
schedule January 28, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This story so beautiful, 10/spice
Love the plot twists and Erik's wonderful angsting. He reminds me of myself sometimes.

I have a little smile deep in my soul every time I see you added another chapter.

PS when dere gonna be sex yo
person Eatmorefish
schedule January 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Aw man I looooove mopey Erik even tho I feel so sorry for the poor guy! And you know what I've also started to have so sacrilegious thoughts about Alexis toooo oh no! And wow wasn't that the worse Cliffie in the world?! Ugh!!! I'll be fervently waiting for the next update! :-) thanks for this one!!!
person Eatmorefish
schedule December 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omgggg poor Erik!!! I feel so frustrated too haha! I also find myself just getting busier and busier as life goes on and it sucks! Can we hope for a chapter before New Years???? As a present please???? Thanks for this chapter tho!
person Andrea
schedule December 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I have been following it since I discovered it - must have been around chapter 23 - and still find it as fresh and hilarious and lovable as then. Kudos to an author who is consistent in her/his writing style without ever once being predictable or boring. Your protagonists' development is so natural it sometimes is hard to believe they are not real... Thank you so much and please continue writing!
schedule November 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 52: Court is definitely a donkey ass. lol What a shit thing to do, locking the boys in the storage closet. Did he know Beji was claustrophobic? That would make it so much worse if he knew that.

I had to Google philtrum; I had never heard of that before. Didn't even know that thingy had a name. lol

I didn't realize Cindy was sharing an apartment with Becky - that's why Erik and Cindy don't share an apartment. I was wondering why they didn't room together? And why didn't they have each other's numbers? It just seemed odd that they wouldn't know each other cell number.

Love Decapitator! He definitely stole all the scenes he was in! Especially where he was "hugging" Erik - that was adorable! :)

Awesome chapter as always! Ok, on to the next one...
schedule November 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Very cute Halloween chapter! I like the way Erik is bonding with Jim's aunt, uncle, etc. Too bad Henry's such a little shit though. lol

Even though Erik and Alexis aren't in the chapters together, per se, I really enjoy reading about Erik's adventures in the city. Oh, and he should have gone to the annual Halloween parade down in the Village. Isn't that where the salon is? He should have known about it - there would have been flyers everywhere.

Anyway...another great chapter, Omni! Looking forward to more. :)
schedule November 26, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I don't know where I've been hiding, but I clearly missed quite a few chapters. :( I'm just playing catch-up now.

This chapter (the one when Erik finally leaves), was really good. It was very emotional. Well, for me anyway. lol

I definitely know what Erik's mom is talking about when she explained why she left NY. My parents left the Bronx for a very similar reason: a five-year-old girl was raped in the kindergarten bathroom where I would have been attending the following year (not the bathroom, the school). My parents high-tailed it across the river to Jersey. lol

Ok, on to the next chapter. I hope A&E can withstand the distance apart. And it is only two hours - it's not like a plane ride or anything. :)
person Eatmorefish
schedule November 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I feel like we share brain waves because I was just thinking about making eggplant parm for a pre-thanksgiving meal! Lol I especially enjoyed the ghost on the couch that was not a ghost. And poor Erik I hope he gets to see his baboo soon but I smell some angst coming on! Thanks for the chapter!
person kylee
schedule November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So happy to see that you are still going on this wonderful story. I love the characters.
person Eatmorefish
schedule September 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ominous!! Glad to see you still writing. Great now I'm worried about the boys. And this Luka kid ughhhh