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for It's Your Fault I'm Like This

by OmnipotentDespot

schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, Erik is so funny! It's such a good date and no one's even naked yet!!!! lol

I had to catch up w/like 3 chapters I think! Great job! So.....now they're a couple; too cute! I was getting confused in the last chapter when Erik thought they were fucking themselves senseless (or something like that), but then towards the end I realized they hadn't had sex. So, I guess I'm not confused anymore. I think.....

Anyway....great job w/the last chapters! I love this story; Erik is a hoot!
person eatmorefish
schedule July 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you're not losing your touch at all! it's still as good as ever. :)
person Erica
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!
person kylee123
schedule July 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6 was great I laughed till tears came. I laughed so hard especially when Erik thought Michelle was home. Good job writing this story.
person !!...!!
schedule June 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I absolutely adore this story. Alexis sounds so cute, I hope that Erik jumps him soon. There's so much potential for this story, but i kinda wish the chapters were longer.
person eatmorefish
schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i'm hooked to this story. sooo cute without being cheesy. keep up the good work :)
schedule June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh God, you're so funny! A delay in getting it up (thatswhatshesaid)! Ha! My kids say that ALL THE TIME!!!!

And Swedes have big you know whats! lol And New Girl flirting w/his future husband - priceless!!!!

Jeez, Erik is too funny; he breaks out in hives, but yay! He has a sleepover. I'm telling ya, Alexis is either gay and/or has a crush on him. And omg, he's avoiding eye contact; he's embarrassed! Can't wait to find out!!!!!!!!

I hope your updating schedule won't be pushed back too much!!! I LOVE this story!!!!
person eatmorefish
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooo very very good....you snuck in a bit of drama and suspense for the next chapter! love it; keep up the good work XD
schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Fuck My Life; love the chapter name!!

Erik is so funny! L'il Erik to take a nap! lol He is so comical!

So....I wonder what Alex is drawing? Hmmmm, could it be Erik? Or boys for that matter? Can't wait to find out!

Great story; I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule June 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohmy! I've been reading this since chapter one and I'm hooked. The latest chapter is so good and has got me so darn curious!! I hope to read more soon~