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for It's Your Fault I'm Like This

by OmnipotentDespot

schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Haha, you're ruining our gay happy meeting! Omg, Erik is so funny, but then again, he has competition; Jim if pretty comical herself: what does the 7 signify? How many brain cells you have left? I swear, I almost choked on my sandwich when I read that!!! :) And she saved the day with the Alexis and Lexus mix-up! lol

And Erik getting all those gifts from the Erik fanclub! hahah I admit tho, I did shed a tear when he donated the money from that, plus the toys, plus the food (which I thought he was going to eat!) to the homeless shelter. That was so sweet of him.

Loved the "what a shame" comment in French. Can't believe I remember that from high school French!

Anyway, great update! Can't wait to read more!

Have a wonderful Xmas if you celebrate it! :)
person eatmorefish
schedule December 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh man oh man that was awesome!!! Do you know the different types of giggles/laughs I had reading this? A lot of it was between creepy old man crossed with evil muahahaha. Like I don't even know why! And despot, does Baboo mean baby in another language? B/c in mine it translates into that although I think you usually use it for kids but not sure. Also Alexis....DOES sound exactly like A Lexus!!!!!!ahahaha!!!! it's the little jokes that get me.....hehe 7 inches (hair duh!!) and gay meeting!!!! I loved the Alexis' hair was cold and I was breathing warm air on him!! I was like wtf and chuckled for a long bit!!!And poor great-granny Mathilda, bless her soul! damn kids complain too much about electronic stuff xD! also liked the naughty bit with the 48 hours in between the legs! man what an awesome read! seriously this story makes me grin like an idiot (the entire ear-to-ear deal and goofy guffaw):D. Aaaand squeals for Erik!!!
Ohhh btw the blank stares are indeed so painful :/ but.....those people are constipated XD. thanks again, made my night!
schedule December 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh fuck! Now what's gonna happen? Now the cat's out of the bag the whole town will know about Erik and Alexis! Omg, what will they do????? hehehe

Love the title of the chapter! :)

Happy Holidays and a Happy 2011!
person eatmorefish
schedule December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooo that was evil! oh and you are damn freaking hilarious. Really! This story makes me giggle like Erik I suppose xD. And Alexis and Erik are too damn adorable for words; I especially liked the cuddling in the beginning. Also the way Larry's life "raped" him--that was hilarious but kinda sad. Thanks for the nice long chapter and the promises of more to come soon! Aaaaand happy early birthday!!!!!
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg, what a great chapter! I was hysterical when Erik was thinking: Like a tissue box, as soon as one left, another popped up. That was such a great line!

I was so glad to see this was updated! Erik is such a hoot and a quick thinker! I thought for sure they were busted when they saw Erik's glitter on Alexis' face!
person eatmorefish
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
man (or woman, i iguess) i love this story! by the way i love your style of writing...just putting in hilarious and witty little bits here and there!
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I have a devil child also! hahahah And God loves him, but he doesn't love me.....:(

So, cute chapter. These kids certainly know how to fluster the Sunday school teacher! lol
schedule September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was reading your disclaimer and well... I am a sunday school teacher. Don't worry I take no offense, I love this story Eric is hilarious. And also regarding that little disclaimer there are two children in my class who love to ask questions like that, so I hope you don't mind but might borrow I your answer the next time they ask me 'that' question. Keep up the good work I love it!
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg, poor Erik, no sex for him tonight! hahahah

God, he is so fucking funny! I don't like cherries. They never know what to do once I take off their bra. omg! And telling the teacher about proper dental care. Shit, I was hysterical! Pinky Knuckles! He should have sent him to another room!

Great chapter; I'm glad you continued with the field trip. It just seemed weird going into the next chapter and they were back home already. And definitely DO NOT WAIT UNTIL HALLOWEEN to update again!!!!! We'll make and exception and have Halloween early for Erik and Alexis! lol
person XD
schedule September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LMFAO!!!!!!!! I nearly died reading chapter 9 when Erik met his roommates, srsly, I laughed so hard i started to choke!
Ahhhh i'm SO happy that they finally did each other, it was HOTT and made me smile.
I'm also excited about the new girl that has been added to the cast, Becky I think. Ohhhh I foresee drama and jealousy!! Always a good element in a story. I eagerly await your next update!