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Wow, I need to know what happens. Please don't stop

Bad James, bad James, giving Adam all these nasty thoughts!!! lol


Casey said so many wonderful things to James; sometimes we really never know what people (friends, family, co-workers) think of us. And it is hard to put past critisisms (did I spell that right?) aside. Like Jason and his "friends" calling James those horrible things. It's hard to forget after so many years of feeling inadequate and insecure.

Hopefully w/Adam's help and Casey's help, James will start to feel better about himself. He needs to feel better about himself before he can move on to a real, healthy relationship.

Oh p.s., I don't think I told you how much I love your name! Everytime I see it, it reminds me of Lupin from Harry Potter. I'm reading the 7th book to my youngest now, so my mind is all Harry Potter stuff! lol

Boy, Jason and Christian sure did a number on James! The poor thing has no self-esteem (which is totally understandable), thinks that no one should help him and be there for him b/c he's not worth it. It's so sad. I hope Adam can talk (or kiss, hahah) some sense into him.

James deserves so much better than those bastards.

Oh, I almost forgot: you wanted to know of any mistakes. The only one I found was a weird sounding sentence, when Adam and Casey were talking to James about Christian:"....and we'll never make sure you're out along." That should have been "....and we'll make sure you're never outside alone."

Anyway, great chapter; I can't wait for the next one!

Awww they kissed.i hope he makes this right...I have a feeling the sh** is about to hit the fan and he's going to need Adam and Casey

Sounds like a hard life. This story is really coming along. I'm liking it more and more with every chapter. Can't wait for the next one.

Boy, that coffee sure seems to calm them all down! I need some of that coffee there....


Poor James; I'm with Adam: it's hard to imagine people treating others like possessions, like they own them. But there are so many sickos out there, hurting kids, bigots, etc., I guess it shouldn't be hard to believe. People using control to the extreme.

James needs therapy; and meds. Lots and lots of meds; I think Prozac would work wonders!

Can't wait for the next update! I was so excited to see you updated so quick!!!!

Just wanted to let you know that I am really enjoying your story. I think your writing is really good and I can't wait to continue the story. Thank you for sharing it!

This is such a great start..Cant wait to find out more of what happened to him...

Really interesting. I can't wait to read more, especially about what happened to Adam to make him so afraid. James seems to want to take care of Adam. Good chapter. Thanks for updating so fast!