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by mudslovesstu

person Anon
schedule June 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like it. lol, poor Kuma, he sounds like a bit of an airhead.

Not to bad at all. just a little advice though, if you want more readers it might be worth changing the summary so the person knows what the story is about.

Other than that, I like!. Looking forward to reading more.