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by herbcat1

person grmblfjx
schedule June 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
"as her [...] partner enters her clit"

Sorry, what? I think this story is over for me already, and that was the first paragraph.
schedule June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. I liked most of it, but I really would have prefered a more satisfying ending. All those guys (Billy, Father, etc.) deserved a much worse punishment. I would have liked to read more about their captures and trials.