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Chapters 1-3. Hahahahah~ I'm liking Torr and Kindle. I can't wait to see what will happen. Did Eton follow Kindle?

Hm...you're developing the story well - it could do with some editing, but that's true of most stories. Mainly little things, like grammar that's slightly off (your vs. you're kind of thing).
I like the way you've tied their pasts together, and how they're interacting. Definitely looking forward to the development - and the intimacy, both sexual and emotional. It's also nice how you're taking it slowly, instead of rushing them straight into sex. Build up is a good thing, and relatively rare in erotica - sometimes yaoi especially. (Just makes the build up here all the more appreciable.)
It looks like it's been a while since you've udpated, so I'll hope for another update soon-ish. (Please? Unless life has interfered and you can't, in which case it sucks but I've been there too, so if I get impatient - smack me. Or something.)
May the words just flow,
Cuzosu

i end up rereading these 3 chapters every do often hoping to find a now one. it's a reaallly goooooood story. won't you pick it up once again?????? thay are a lovely pair od exiled dragons *.* please, update

i tried your other story, 'Blue'; but i think this one is waaaayyyy better. i like the characters more! they have more spirit inside, are not too naive, but at times are funny. and Torr is intriguing: hot, but reserved....
i't truly a pity that you won't continue with this story!!!! =.=' it's the first time i find shapeshifters mostly in their 'animal' form. you described it sooo well, that i came to really love seeing them interact in their dragon form.
for instance, it's too cute when Kindle relaxes outside laying like a huge, a little bit clumsy, lizard. =)

please, please, please add more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awesome work - i love blue so i thought i´d give this a shot even though it hasn´t been updated in ages and i wasn´t disappointed. the combination of dragons, mating behaviour and stupid old clan rules is great...my guess so far is that when kindle panicked that eton tried to mate him anyway aka force him, poor thing probably had to use his spikes to escape(those spikes for submissives are a nice touch btw) that would explain why he´d rather die than go back to his intended and is THAT spooked of getting mated despite being in heat. though i can´t imagine what torr´s story is - maybe that a#hole killed the one he really wanted? na, he would´ve been punished for this, even as an offspring form the ruling family...unless he made it look as if torr did it and he had to flee...damn, i really hope you´ll date up again one day!

i like ur storys cant wait fo a up date

I am not usually a dragon/man fan, but I do like this story. I really like how the characters in this story seem to be reversed compared to the characters in Blue. Ashton went after Elijah, whereas in this one, Kindle is the one that is pursuing Torr even if its not...actively or completely intentional. He seems like he wants Torr, but he's hesitant because he doesn't want that sort of life, which is what prompted him to run away in the first place. Or at least, one of the reasons why.

It seems you are having trouble with this story. If you would like help, I could be of service. Right off, I can tell you that you need another character. Perhaps a character that comes along and bothers them in some way. For example, perhaps the character thinks of him/herself as a matchmaker... *winks* or something along those lines or something completely different.

If you would like help, you can reach me at my email: god_of_insanity@hotmail.com

I would be glad to help since I do enjoy this story (and Blue) plus I am very good at generating ideas. Anywhos, ciao for now.

I you pace yourself and build up the characters/culture, I think this could be a nice story. Definitely looking forward to another update!! I'm hooked either way~ :)



Joanna K.

Just a dream, dang lol.

Thanks for the new chapter. Both Torr and Kindle have been traumatized by love. By the same family too. It seems they are both love shy. I can see the two of them sitting there lusting after each other - both unwilling to make the first move. I wonder if it was Torr who was watching Kindle in the river. If not, then Kindle might be in trouble. The story is going great. I am looking forward to the next chapter.