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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really really like this story.
I think I know what's going on, but at the same time, I have no idea what's going to happen.
Yay for wolves!
More soon?
I think I know what's going on, but at the same time, I have no idea what's going to happen.
Yay for wolves!
More soon?
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
wow...thanks for such a quick update!
I wonder why Eli and his mother don't belong to a pack...I liked how Eli is so uncomfortable with seeing Ashton naked...
Ashton caught a rabbit...I liked how that was a hint on how he could provide for his mate...
I wonder about Mama's warning about watching himself because it's his first change since turing 18...sounds kindof ominious...such a mystery...
I wonder why Eli and his mother don't belong to a pack...I liked how Eli is so uncomfortable with seeing Ashton naked...
Ashton caught a rabbit...I liked how that was a hint on how he could provide for his mate...
I wonder about Mama's warning about watching himself because it's his first change since turing 18...sounds kindof ominious...such a mystery...
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic!!! I somehow got the feeling that the next full moon will get interesting^^like whitewolfe and mating or something!!! I so can't wait for the two of them to get together^^ See you again soon!!!
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the next full moon O_~
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Eli and Ashton are so cute. Eli truly is like the virginal daughter. Mama is quite the mysterious one. Poor Eli must have had quite the time growing up with her. She needs to explain some things to her innocent son.
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Weeeeee update! Another wonderful chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens on the next full moon. Oh and I like the character names btw.
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
2 weeks to go <3
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cute! Love the story and love that you update so quickly! Can't wait to see where you take the story!
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think you did a very good job with this chapter. I really felt the fear in this chapter. My heart was about to break into two. Thank goodness Ashton showed up in time to save our submissive little wolf.
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June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update!
I think your fear scenes were good; I could tell that Eli was scared...and the brown wolf whoever it was is a creep...I wonder all about the stuff he said about Ashton, it sounded as if he was jealous of Ashton...but I'm glad that Ashton came and saved Eli...now he won't let Eli leave his sight...
Looking forward to more!
I think your fear scenes were good; I could tell that Eli was scared...and the brown wolf whoever it was is a creep...I wonder all about the stuff he said about Ashton, it sounded as if he was jealous of Ashton...but I'm glad that Ashton came and saved Eli...now he won't let Eli leave his sight...
Looking forward to more!