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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha! I like Ashton's mini proposal. So cute. I really love Mama - she is so absent minded. It is good that she helped Eli to realize that Ashton has more in mind than just running. It is so cute. I love the image of Ashton and Eli together. I wish I could draw. I would definitely make some fanart for them.
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
once again i like the fast update and i like how confused he was it was so unbelivbaly cute lol =.= lol so any ways i liked how the seconded part turned put yeah so i want to see if he still going to try and explain to ashton that he didn't know what it meant or not hehe and aston seems like he would not to try and force him self on anyone so idk but cant wait none the less.
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think you've misunderstood me, I don't mean mature and sophisticated more like...older? What I am trying to say is , to me it feels like shouta O_O hahahaha but! It has gotten better with the chapter..=D
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! I kind of saw that comming ^^Well I think Eli likes him but doesn't know so jet so I think things will be ok ^^Hope too see you again tomorrow!!!
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for updating!
Eli is so cute when he was looking and waiting for Ashton...I wonder what his pack business was...I hope the brown wolf doesn't try to interfere again...well Eli now knows what Ashton wanted from the run; and that he wants to mate with Eli.
Update soon...
Eli is so cute when he was looking and waiting for Ashton...I wonder what his pack business was...I hope the brown wolf doesn't try to interfere again...well Eli now knows what Ashton wanted from the run; and that he wants to mate with Eli.
Update soon...
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Eli's mother is an idiot.He mentions her being cryptic and I have noticed how she tends more to give him "looks" then telling him what is on her mind. Why would she not warn him or explain things I don't know. She knew what Ashton was there for and yet she didn't really warn her son at all. Now shes like look what -you- did you should have known better. It's not Eli's fault he has a dumbass parent. To be fair Ashton saw how naive the boy was and his lack of wolf knowledge, he probably should have made sure Eli knew what he was asking.
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more please and soon
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
love this story just love it, its so interesting and fun and really good. i cant wait too see what happens next update soon ^_^
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very well done chapter. I did not want it to end. I am so anxious to find out Eli's answer. mama made me laugh again. She seems to be fine with the marriage. I want them to have lots of pups too. I am looking forward to the next chapter. Lovely story.
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June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well that talk didn't go well...poor Ash.