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by AngelicSmiles

schedule June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
huuu haaaaaaaaaaa?

and well! Eli is the son of an Alpha! that's good isn't it? great! Ash's pack should not have a problem with that yeah?

hints of the mpreg explanation i see? So, it's like, when Eli gets more, into the pregnancy... another opening is gonna appear down there or what?

- nekoii
person mashael
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more please :)
person Angie's # 1 Fan
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i was biting my nails all through the begining of this chapter! i was so worried that eli wouldnt show but i was so glad he did. the run was just adorable! i loved how eli made ashton work hard to get him & didnt just roll over and say done.

the sex was so sweet too just like eli's & ashtons first time was supposed to be. i seriously cant wait for the pups! will they look like ashton or eli? will they have boys, girls, one of each, twins? gah! >___< i cant wait!
person Angie's #1 Fan
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
part 2 is up! i was reading ch 8 & i left & when i come back & refresh the page Ch 9 yay!

yes! were finally going to find out about eli's parents! i knew there was something up with mama & i always wondered where eli's papa was. poor eli not knowing your real parents must hurt. mama was a great mother to him, a little grumpy, but great nonetheless so im glad he loves her just as much as one would love their biological mother. i really cant wait to find out all his backstory & hopefully ashtons too.

of course mama would kick them out hahahha but hey with their own private little space to go at it all night they wont get any noise complaints hahaha i CANT WAIT for the pups!! ^-^

we(or atleast i) dont mind waiting just a little longer for you to finish this wonderful story. so many writers update once every 2 weeks but you do it daily so your entitled to a little break! take care :]
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Does this mean Eli is going to stay in that house ALONE while Ashton goes off to hunt, or something... THATS NOT SAFE!!! D=
person smint45
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
his wwas really nice!!! It explaines a few things!!! I hope you life is going to be allright!!! Hope to see you soon non the less!!!
person mashael
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooooow sweet ^|^
person kylee123
schedule June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. It explains a lot about Mama and her mysterious ways. Especially since she has not had firsthand experience in things such as mating and giving birth. I am sorry that she has been without a mate her whole life. It will be interesting to see how Eli does change when he becomes pregnant. Eli better get back so Ashton can smex him up again. LOL.
schedule June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my. that was all done rather quick and fast and... quick. O_O

so... they're mate's now...

and we're gonna get many many pups...

just how does the mpreg factor in this story work?
person kylee123
schedule June 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha - Mama kicked them out. Very funny. I don't blame her. It would be hard to listen to two horny young wolves going at it all night long. I think it is so romantic that they will be setting up a house together. More privacy for smexing and puppy making. I am interested in finding out more about Ashton's pack and also about Eli's mysterious past. Now you have me googling "zompocalypse". Good luck with everything else.