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WAH! a hundred over reviews!!! CONGRATULATIONS :D *throws confetti*
A great achievement... and now... How about some treats for your dear reviewers?
I WANT ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! QUICKLY!

you mean to say Ashton doesn't know what's going on with Eli's body? Like why touching there hurt. or why he has that scent to him.
OH NO! Ashton! you're the dom in this relationship! You've GOTTA know SOMETHING!!!
Good thing Eli has mum there. *sighs*. what a disaster it would be if not for mum

AND WHAT A RELIEF! I was so sure that guy was gonna capture Eli or something bad!!! *phew*

okay, hope I get ta read your next chap soon!


- nekoii

yay new chapter ^^

Hurray! Puppies are on way! I am so glad that Eli did not get kidnapped! That poor boy has so much to learn. Mama needs to start talking and teaching her son better. She should be teaching him about pregnancy and stuff. Even though she was never actually pregnant herself.

Oh no!!! Ashton! Why didn't you check Eli carefully! You should have told him to stay at home!
He's obviously 'developing' like mama said!

Then now Eli's gone and land himself in trouble... Oh no oh no...

That was definitly great!!!His hurting backside probably has something to do with the Mpreg warning!!! BBut who is the guy who shot the other wolf down??? Will he hurt eli?? Can't wait for more!!!! See you again and I hope your hand is getting better!!!

thanks for the update!

I have a few guesses about the smell that is coming from Eli...and I wonder is Ashton knows...or if he is as confused as Eli...

Was that man who killed the brown wolf, who was after Eli a hunter?

What a cliffhanger, update soon!

oh~ i missed you
nice chapter darling, waiting for more~

Yikes and double yikes! I wonder how Eli is going to protect his babies if he freezes up everytime danger shows up? I am hoping and praying that Eli will not get kidnapped. He needs to start asking those questions and Ashton needs to keep a better eye on him.

Ok.... I freaking love this story! I mean what else can I say besides HELL YEA ANGIE DO IT BIG!!!! The way you weave your story is absolutely amazing, and you put so much detail in the most minute things, which is something that I like, because I feel as if most writer ignore the set up of their stories. When I'm reading I feel as if I can actually see everything happening, so I hope you are getting ready to publish your work or something, because you are definitely doing your thing! Now... I'm also MAD at you, since my friends think that I am freaking weird!!!! Let's put it this way, I am an Afro-soul chick (imagine a skinnier version of Jill Scott) from Brooklyn (New York BABY!!!) who got displaced (more like told we are moving) by my parents to South Carolina, and everything was crappy until I met my three best friends (we call each other the Quartet or the Rainbow Coalition, and all of us are SO different- imagine a ghetto Asian girl who can solve any math problem LOL, preppy Blond hair blue eyed white girl, and our typical saucy Latina, and then there's me LOL)!!! So Sara Anne (our little Milk Drop in the Coalition) decides that we need to go hiking in the forest... now I have never been hiking (hello... I'm from NY, taking the subway is an adventure in of itself cuz of the crazies)... so as we are walking through the forest, I hear twigs snapping and weird stuff... so my black behind decides to say in a paranoid voice OUT-LOUD: "Ashton is that you?" Yea... so all of them stop and look at me like I was high, and I was completely embarrassed. ::Sigh:: This is what happens when you start reading great fiction, reality and fantasy start blending together, and you begin to hear things!!!

this was great as always!!! i bit confiusing with his past!!! Why did mam ha eli all of the sudden?? And from whom did his parents protect him?? Well I hope it is going to be explained later on!!! See you again!!!