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by AngelicSmiles

person kylee123
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was quite the revelation. Poor Mama must have been so shocked, being so young at the time. I wonder if she will be able to find resolution with Jack. I am wondering if he still loves her after all this time. The wold being in love with the hunter. I guess this means we will be seeing puppies soon. How awesome! I am looking forward to that.
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ouh Jack~~~~

ouh~~~~ O_O wow~ uhm.

I lack words suddenly. Mama's amternal instincts kicked in the moment she say baby Eli I guess... and after that. Jack's history.
What's he doing comming back and all. o_O" suspicious.... ho hum.
person JJ
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update...

and now we know who the hunter, Jack is...and what he meant to El...and that he was the one who hunted Eli's pack and was going to kill poor Eli...I wonder if he was trying to apologize to El...I can't wait for the epilogue...over so soon...
person mashael
schedule July 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
owww please more~ wanna see more
person smint45
schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was great!!! I knew ash was going to love it!!!1 So can't wait for the pupps!!!! See you!!!
person JJ
schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update...what a wonderful chapter...


Ashton was so happy that Eli was pregnant...he would make a great father...and I can see Eli going all protective on protecting his pups....I wonder who Mama went after...maybe the man with the gun...
person kylee123
schedule July 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Happy Happy! Ashton and Eli stuck alone in the house together? Time to celebrate? I just hope Mama doesn't get herself into trouble with the hunter. Unless there is something going on that we don't know about with Mama and the hunter.
person JJ
schedule July 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for another update...I hope the hunter man isn't going to cause too much trouble...

Eli found out that he was pregnant...and he fainted...poor Eli...but his Mama seems happy!

Can't wait for the next chapter.
person miles
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
At last someone told him ^^
The hunter is weird ! Why did he let go Eli ?
He must know he's a wolf too ?!
Waiting for more XDD
person smint45
schedule July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ae that was so sweet!!! Eli fainting when he gets to know hes pregnant!!! But it was kind of obvious!!! Theey are both quite dense sometimes ^^ See you again!!!