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by AngelicSmiles

person JJ
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh, I like the start, I can't wait to read what happens next...looks like Eli was left go by the other wolf...I wonder who the wolf could have been...
person DarkSacrifice
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update Update ...this is interesting <3
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Wow! I am really looking forward to reading the rest of this story. I like the idea and I love stories about wolves (there just isn't enough of them). I can't wait to read what happens when Eli gets home.... :)
person shadow
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great beginning!

can't wait to read more!
person KageKiri
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh, I like this, is interesting.
Please post the next part soon.
person Aleks
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice start :)
person jordin
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! =)
I really liked the first chapter of this story, just wondering about the next when I refreshed...
really added to my day. The main character Eli is very likeable. Please do update soon!
person smint45
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was great!!! Thanks for the fast update and the chara dicribtions!!! Is elis hair as red a his plet??? I so can't wait for him aand the white wolf too meet again!!! He is probably wathhig the whole time anyway^^See you soon
person JJ
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update...that was quick!

I must say Eli's mama sounds pretty tough...and motherly...but Eli's punishment wasn't too bad...three weeks until the full moon!
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter, and I was so excited when you updated so quickly! I like the name Elijah too, I love when it's shortened to Eli tho! Just a quick question, do Eli n his mother have a pack, n if so are they nearby? There just hasn't been any mention of them yet, so I was just wondering.

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