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by AngelicSmiles

schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
a note for you.
when you get reviwers named 'Anonymous' they're usually the type that do not review often. so when they do. something's good going on. ;)
hope that spurs you on. I'm elated to know you have quite a few chapters ready to be posted. :D
I shall be checking in on this story, and hope that the coming chapters would hold more excitement~ ^___^

overall, i love the idea of a submissive, mischievous male xD
and the name.. Elijah. and when you shorten it, it becomes Eli... its... very very nice. ;)

keep going! i wanna see more!
person js
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued about what you have so far. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
person smint45
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like the beginning of this!!!! I can't wait for more!!!! Hope to see you again soon!!!
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A great start! I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhhhh interesting.... Blue eyes watching him without him knowing.... Can't wait for more
Update soon please :)
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cute and interesting so far - can't wait to read more! There really needs to be more werefics XD well-written ones that is. And this one is definitely well-written - and intriguing; wonder what'll happen next :D
person GellyBelly
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Niiiice, thi story is going to be soooo hot! I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Liz
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i like it so far! Eli is adorable, and im curious to see what happens next. Keep up the good work!
person PyTerato
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's an interesting concept. A little hard to follow but that may be my own ADD kicking in. Eli seems cute, and I'd love to get to know that dominant wolf a little more.
person Elken
schedule May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sounds interesting so far. i wonder what's going to happen next?