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October 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful! I loved it! a little rough in places but easy to follow and a very sweet story! Your writing style was very easy to understand the emotions and actions of the characters! I hope you keep up the wonderful work!
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August 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! The only problem is that it wasn't long enough! lol
This was wonderful!!!
This was wonderful!!!
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March 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! That was really good! I absolutely LOVED Eli being so naive and a bit dense. Just loved it!! I also like how you didn't spell it out (in the first part) that Eli was pretty much adopted. This was just a really well written story that made me laugh and had warm fuzzy feelings all over. *happy grin*
Thanks for sharing!
Thanks for sharing!
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January 9, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I very much enjoyed this story. I love how you did the relationships between the characters, especially between Eli and Mama. I also very much agree that there was no way Mama and Jack could make up and get together. Not after him and his friends were talking about cold-bloodedly killing and mounting a wolf pup. That is just beyonf cruel. I'm glad you decided to post this. I read all of it in one sitting. There needs to be a lot more good writers like you posting on here.
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December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Muy linda historia. Eli es simplemente adorable, aunque se mete en mas problemas *0*
Me encanta la historia, espero que pronto puedas continuar con ella ^○^
Me encanta la historia, espero que pronto puedas continuar con ella ^○^
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August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story, could have been more though! I was hoping for a boy, always do when there's mpreg involved. Can't Eli have more babies?
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July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And the babies. baby. is out! pop! omg so fast!
then now... then now...? the end? D=
what about Eli's parents? What about the rest of Ashton's pack? what about JACK!???
then now... then now...? the end? D=
what about Eli's parents? What about the rest of Ashton's pack? what about JACK!???
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July 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the wonderful story...
I like the name Faelyn...so magical...I think it is a great name for the pup...
I like the name Faelyn...so magical...I think it is a great name for the pup...
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July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So cuuutteee......
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July 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was kind of sad and terrible what this jack person did!!! She should have told him!!! I hope we see the puppies in the epilog!!! See you again next time!!!