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yay great chapter already wanting more...cant wait for the next chapter...i am really loving this story!!!

Just wanted to let your know that your story was the first I have read in the Original story section. I am impressed by your characters and their development. I am still a bit confused by what is all going on with the different species and Miku, but I can wait until you clarify things in later chapters. I hope that you don't plan on having "Prince Charming" get his claws into Naru.

Also what color are Naru's wings? ... when they first appeared you said they where white but in the last chapter they were black when Kou sees them.

Thanks for posting.

Well I have to say that Luka deserved the punch he got from Naru. He has to decide if he loves Hiro or not. I wonder is Hiro still loves him after this latest incident. I hope Hiro will get to turn the tables on him, maybe cause Luka to experience some jealousy firsthand. I am hoping that Naru will still get to see his sister Miku one more time. It is sad to think of them being separated and longing to see each other. I can't wait to see how Naru reacts when he does find out that he is pregnant.

Review 1-22: This story, like your other stories, is so riveting. I was literally sitting on the edge of my seat reading about what would come next. I was never bored while reading this story and the sequences of events in this story were so natural and they flow effortlessly from one scene to the next. The cuteness, adorable characters and underlying suspense and mystery that keep this story interesting. Naru was funny and clever. His creative mini-revenges against his boss was laugh-worthy. Though he cracked me up but what made me go smiled was Ryuu's inability to make him pay. Ryuu was always angry at Naru's pranks but Naru's smiles, laughter, and words always make him forget his anger. Seriously sweet. Although I am still miffed at Ryuu for being insensitive about not knocking down the wall the second Naru requested it be done for him to take care of his need. For a second, I had a scary premonition that Ryuu would be like that baka Luka (it rhymes!).

I hope that Hiro continues to punish/ignore Luka. Luka doesn't deserve Hiro even now or especially now. It seems as if he still wants Hiro to understand his decision from 23 years ago and realize that they could still be together had Hiro not up and left him. Luka hasn't matured at all in the past years and he still intentionally hurt Hiro with his stupid lies. For all his supposed desire to get back with Hiro, he is still mated to the guy that his tribe chose for him and still defended his decision in marrying that guy instead of choosing to be with Hiro. If Hiro decides to take him back, I hope that it won't be anytime soon and not before Luka worked to get him back i.e. forsaking his species. If Luka can't do it, he is just selfish in trying to get Hiro back into his life. He wants both Hiro's love and his species and wants Hiro's will to bend for him. He never seemed to care/love about about Hiro, no matter what he professed, that baka yaro Luka.

Thank you, can't wait for the next release!

Great chapter yaoilovers. My very favorite moment is when Ryuu found out that Naru is pregnant. So hilarious! He really will have to learn fast that he should never argue with a pregnant mate. I am sure naru is going to kill him when he finds out that he is pregnant.

So, are Hiro and Luka going to get back together? I don't mean right away because Luka should have to work extremely hard for it. Ryuu is going to have his hands full when Naru learns of his impending motherhood. I cannot wait to see Naru's reaction to meeting his birth father and then his grandfather (great grandfather?). I await more from you.

Update soon!!

Excellent chapter yaoilovers. I wonder what Naru will say when he finds out that Hiro is still alive. I also wonder if Ryuu knows that they found Miku's body. There will be two shocks for Naru in one day. Keep up the good work.

This chapter was action packed! Naru's pregnant, Luka knows Hiro is alive, and possible progress with Kou and Kousuki! I hope Naru is alright since he now has WINGS and a TAIL! I feel bad about how Naru is going to take the death of his sister, especially being pregnant.

Please update soon!

IThank you for the update! I just want to say that I love your stories and I'm extremely happy when there's an update (it literally makes my day brighter). I might not be able to review all the time but I am still one of your biggest fans. Keep up the good work!

Ah, just love this story!