rate_review Reviews

Thanks! I really loved your story.

I loved the story very much. Can't wait to read the next part. Pretty please?

This is really entertaining. It is well paced and has all kinds of things to make me keep reading. There were some typos now and then but I really hope you update once more for it. I enjoyed your characters, they seemed very human human but I would expect royalty to be a little more aggressive. I felt that William just kind of fell into his role a tad bit too quickly. Ah but such is love.

Anyways keep up the good work. Also while having a lot of chapters wasn't much of a problem I recommend skipping a line whenever there is dialogue or whenever the POV changes. Makes it a whole lot easier to read. ;)

I really enjoyed the world you created with this story. The interactions between the two men was very hot.

Slight quibble: sometimes it was difficult to follow the back-and-forth shifting in POV.

I hope that you post more of your writing for us to enjoy.