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for To Be Taken

by autoreanon

person daveb
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brill. MOAR. I hope u make them a couple.
person aquamum
schedule May 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was a.w.e.s.o.m.e. ~ great erotic writing !!!
person circe266
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely, very hot. I only wish there was more of a physical description of the man.
person zoo
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! I like that the woman had a bit of sass to her in the beginning. The ending has a heavy note of finality in it, and yet you make further progression between them as lovers a possibility. I hope you write more.
person Amanda88
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story, please update again soon!
schedule May 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The narrative and imagery are fantastic! It really pulls the reader in feeling part of the whole thing. Awesome job!