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Awww so sweet!!! I saw a video like this story on utube as well, but it ended horribly sad, 1 of the characters becoming so upset w not bein w his luv that he smashes his hand hitting the wall. It ends w him writing 2 his love w his nondominant hand & his writing is severely poorer. I love the ending 2 this SO much mor!!! I hope i can read other sweet stories like this from u mor often.

Rukia

I loved this! Very fresh and imaginative. Nicely written also. Love conquers all.

This was pretty well written. I liked it!

Thank ye kindly for sharing it.

Love it grl!!!

OMG I LOVE THIS!!!!! I was totally crying at the end and they couldnt be together. Hell I was getting mad at that stupid glass wall and cursing the person/creature that put it there. Im so glad that they are together. I would love for you to continue this. YAY I love happy endings.

This ne shot is really fantastic!!! I totally love it!!! I was so sad when I thought that the two can't be together!!! And even more happy when they were on one side!!! Such a sweet story!!! Thanks a lot!!! See you in MD !!!

A very very nice short story, I was afraid that at the end they would never be together. I like your ending waaaaaay better than the rather gruesome ending of the video!

If you ever feel the need to get away from Moonlight, I hope you treat us to another short story!!

Wow. This is an amazing story. I'm speechless. It's so beautiful; Darum (sorry, I probably spelled it wrong) did all he could to get over, under and thru the glass wall. And then the end, when they realized the glass moved so they could be together; beautiful. I was in tears. What an amazing story; you are a fabulouos storyteller. I loved it.

So I kinda really really loved this. I've got a soft spot for these kind of stories and I have to say this was by far the best short story I've read in a long time. I know you only wrote it to take a break from MD (which I also love btw, just never review) but I'd be ecstatic if you were to eventually turn this into a longer story. Maybe tell us about the two 'worlds' and then add a bunch more with Darim and Talence talking. Then Darim's world becomes aware of Talence's and he tries to convince the Elders to find a way to destroy the wall or something. Idk, I just really liked this >_< The video was great too, cute and sad and really well done. Anywho, I hope you consider making this into a longer story. No hard feelings if you don't =P Love your work, keep it up.