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October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will keep working on this story. I also loved the other story you wrote at the same time about the guy who found out his girlfriend was two timing him and then he met this cute boy at the skatepark. Please update soon.
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August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's impossible to have a set of true identical male/female twins. The 'identical' part covers gender as well.
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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story. I can't wait to read more and find out what happens on the date. You made a few mistakes. When she says "You own me" it should be "You owe me" you have to change all the 'own' to 'owe'. Also when the line 'he was in his school Football team (Which he love)'. Love should be plural it should be '(which he loves)'.
Thanks for the great story and I hope you continue
Thanks for the great story and I hope you continue
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May 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great start- definitely interested in more. Both boys seem like really nice guys- hopefully they hit it off :) Don't like the sister much, though. Update again soon!
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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious. I already knew that I would like this one. Ed is great when he is playing Eden. Very good.
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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It sounds like it will be fun to read :) I like the characters. Something I find weird is that its the first story that its setting is in Puerto Rico, where I live >_< and not only that, I live in Carolina. XD Really weird!
Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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May 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cute story so far. I take it that English isn't your first language? There are a few contradictory tenses here and there, a few misspelled words. I guess I figured since the Spanish was probably dead on, that was your native tongue.
Anyway, I like to story so far; I know you have another story up here, so I'm going to go read that one now. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Anyway, I like to story so far; I know you have another story up here, so I'm going to go read that one now. Looking forward to the next chapter!