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for What's Your Secret

by SarahsKitten

person Tahn
schedule December 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this, my only complaint is that there isn't more of it. Looking forward to more :D
schedule February 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I thought you forgot about this story! lol

So what does becoming a mate for an incubus mean?
person Kip
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, hot hot HOT! Really liked this (didn't find it until you already had six chapters up, or I would have reviewed sooner). Nicely done, pace just enough to peak the interest while still building tension. Looking forward to the next exciting instalment. 'Purr
schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you're back! :)

Interesting concept w/the incubii, or is it one "i"? I'm not up on my incubii grammar.

Anyway, can't wait to find out what happens next!
schedule July 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Did you mean ten years longer or ten times longer.
schedule June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, if that's a wet dream w/a quasi-Derrick, imagine the real thing! hahahah
schedule June 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, I've never read a story w/an incubus. I honestly didn't even know what it was. But, I'll give it a shot, because this is a cute story and want to see a happily ever after! :)
person kylee123
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Zeil is like a skittish kitten. He wants Derrick but he runs away at every chance he gets. I am sure he went to the pool with the hopes of meeting Derrick there. Hopefully we will get to find out what Derrick really is now. I hope Zeil will be able to deal with it.
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So wait! Derrick's secret isn't that he's a vampire? Isn't THAT a secret??? hahaha There's more? Ok, now I'm really curious!


I just noticed one little error: when Zeil is going outside for a swim, he took the stairs, you forgot the k in took. He he, I bet you were just in such a hurry to write than almost smut scene! :)

Can't wait for the next chapter! Zeil must be scared out of his mind! Poor thing!
schedule June 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this story and look forward to reading more.