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yeah an update!!

Oh...looks like Cain opened a door behind the furnace..so creepy...I wonder what is in there, and what it means by wanting help...hopefully Cain didn't let something out...

I wonder why Stiles got angry when Cain said that the doppleganger Nana was upstairs...How are the spirits able to reach the upstairs, if they are only supposed to be in the basement...

Johhny is back...I like him! I must say his reaction to finding out about Stiles...er...Will...fucked Cain was hilarious...

I wonder what the pastor knows about the spirits...

update soon!!

"Help me", what the fuck IS that?????? OMG, I'm like totally creeped out now!

But before I get into all that - welcome back Clover!!!! I sure missed you these past two weeks! Or was it only one, well, it seems like forever!!!!

Ok, this chapter was like rolling on the floor laughing! Oh God, I'm still wiping the tears from my eyes! From "I think I should have a free pass to ride any nerve I want", to "When Nana neutered me with her nails", to "I'll never get laid again and my mother will run out of bad things to say about me", to my favorite, "Why, did he fuckyou and call you 'Peter' as he came too?" OMFG, that is the best line EVER!!!!!! I CANNOT BELIEVE HE SAID THAT!!!

Ok, awesome chapter; it certainly made up for you not being around, well, almost! I can't wait to find out what the fuck that thing is in the basement - it couldn't be PETER, could it????? Oh God, that's a creepy thought! Now Cain will have to fight his Pappy for Stiles! hahahha

Poor Cain is being stalked by a jealous ghost. I wonder if it was at the bar with him too. The whole thing is very interesting. I wonder if this ghost was being mistreated by Cain's grandfather. The mystery is very intriguing. Good luck with the moving. It is always so exhausting.

this a very nicely made story. its so nice that I'm going to stop reading it because the spirit of the house in your story its making me paranoid in my own room since I'm reading this at night and I will still fell the same in daylight.

If Cain is smart he'll run like hell and leave the country haha! Excellent work!

Well, that was freaky! So...like Stiles before, was Nana temporarily "possessed" by this thing from the basement?

And speaking of Stiles, he and gramps never did it? But he only wished to? Yuck! OMG, ....so, how many of those decrepit old farts do you jerk off to? Hahah, loved that line!!!! And double eeewwwww when Stiles called Cain Peter by mistake! Oh God, that was disgusting!!! lol Yep, nothing spells romance than being compared to an old, dead man! Hahah You are too funny! Another falling-off-my-stool chapter!

Good luck with your move and hopefully you'll be back online after next week! (I'll keep my fingers crossed for you! Who am I kidding, I'm keeping my fingers crossed for me! :)) Just kidding - good luck w/you move! Can't wait until you're back!!!

oh my gosh!! What an update...thanks...

Stiles totally thought it was Peter that he kissed and had smex with...how sad for Cain being treated that way...I wonder what Stiles dark childhood is...

I don't think that was Nana...maybe in the beginning, but then I think the real Nana left the room...but not when she harmed Cain...I think it was one of those basement Purgatory shades...or spirits...poor Cain, he can't get a break...and what a suprise Nana knew that Stiles liked Peter...and that Stiles even told her...

What a cliffie, update soon!

gosh. U write some crazy sh@t. It has the quality of Steven King and Dean Kootz. Ur characters are so diverse and the story lines are so different. I'm glad ur writing again. I am such a fan.

ooh, So it wasn't really his grandmother, this story's so creepy. I wonder what will happen next.

that underwear bit cracked me up!
erugh! why did he do that? he knows stiles doesnt even like him! gooodness
'big bony moroney' lols
ew. that is soo weird. but ok, the old man was faithful?
wha wha whaaaaaahhhh? sins? whose? the grandpas? what the helll was he doing in that basement? holly crow!!!
ouch. ouch. ouch. lets hope his testical doesnt rupture? oohhh. its going to hurt peeing for the next coupla days. oooh ouch.
that was not nana! shes not even home yet is she!? hooooooo.... wow. insane. if that wasnt nana then who was it? was it the 'it'? and if so, i thought that maybe it couldnt cross the white line or something....?
woah, was the old man faithful or not?... hes not cains father is he? is there a bigger story about the mother other than shes a bitch?
if hes a photographer, i figured hed be taking pictures and stuff while there....they always have their cameras with them no matter what.
welps, i hope that was the final straw for cain, and he goes to leave. but i imagine something would stop him from leaving.... i like the creepiness going on.... yea.
its really piqued me. lookin forward to the next bit.