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(10) Oh Lawrence why did you have to go to the side of crazy, I was rather liking you. That chapter definitely took a turn into bizarre, sure it was always strange but this... 0.0

God just what has Pappy been doing all these years and if there's a lot of people that need peace then why is Lawrence's dad the one in the basement? You would think that would be because he meant something to Pappy but if that's the case why would he hurt him - granted we don't know yet how or why he's dead. It'll be interesting when we learn the history because if they were friends why would Pappy do something to hurt him and if they didn't like each other why would he keep him in the basement. It seems there's got to be something there since his ghost does seem to want to comfort Cain, either that or even the ghost is trying to soften Cain up before he does something to him, wouldn't that be just his luck.

How do we know Cain is beyond trusting most people, he willingly took comfort from the ghost in the basement, things are not going well for him poor boy. Which of course brings up the chase scene, which I loved really well done, I was holding my breath. One thing I did wonder, was Johnny part of the mob or is he going to show up later and be all WTF. He just didn't seem like the type to be involved in all this mob stuff but who knows they all seem to go back and forth between helping and attacking.

Such a action packed chapter, can't wait for the next update, hope your having a good night :)

thanks for the update...

Poor Cain, it looks like everyone is out to get him...and he couldn't outrun cars...looks like he got caught, I wonder what Stiles meant that "it had to end," and what exactly does Lawrence mean that Cain is the experiment...so many unanswered questions...

Lawrence reacted really bad when he found out that Cain could touch the ghost of his father...I wonder what Peter did to Cain...

OK that's seriously fucked up! Im'confused here. I like Cain so please don't hurt him much. Can't wait for next chapter, which hopefully will answer some questions. Always a pleasure to read! :*

Woahhh. That was f'ed up right there. XD!
Jesus I gotta know what happens next.
I await the next!

(9) Dear Lord, did you just have coffin sex in your story, you're such an odd little cookie ;) I mean how did you even come up with that... actually you know what, I don't want to know^^ And the image of Lawrence coming up out of the coffin and Stiles standing there, I can't stop myself from snickering everytime I imagine it ^_^ The whole lot of these guys just make me shake my head even if I do rather adore them, if they're this much of a handful now could you imagine them when they were younger :)

Then again we have someone protecting Cain and it's Stiles, although maybe I shouldn't be surprised because while Stiles has some definite issues with Cain I don't think he really wants him dead. It keeps getting harder to figure who's on who's team, one minute you got someone ready to throw you to the phantoms (so to speak) and the next they're lying and protecting you.

It'll be interesting once we start to get some answers as to what it is these guys really are up to because right now it just seems that Lawrence wants sex and Stiles, well actually it's probably going to take a while longer before I start to figure him out. Speaking of Lawrence I wonder what Cain thought he would accomplish by taking Lawrence to the basement (besides sex ;). It seems like this thing, whatever it is only really has anything to do with Cain which brings up another question if it doesn't show up for anyone else how is it that the whole town not only knows about what was going on but believes it too, someone else has got to have seen something.

Projects? Experiments? seriously what was Pappy up to and if I were Cain I'm not so sure I would be this eager to get myself mixed up in the mess. Good chapter I loved the steamy sex and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter, will it be more sex or more creepy basement dweller :) Hope your having a good night hun ^_^

OMG!! Just ready the story straight through. On the edge of my seat the entire time. What a great read. Can't decide what I think about Stiles or Lawrence. I like them both at this point, but Stiles comes off sexier and I would like to see something more develop with Stiles and Cain. You've got me so confused, bouncing back and forth between Stiles and Lawrence. Cain is a little harlot. I think Cain needs a strong hand to help keep him under control or he needs to get smart. He's messing with his life sleeping around like he is. Although, the sex definitely adds to the story. Would just like to see him get smarter with it. Anyway, keep up the great story.

Yeah, those NYC subways; lord knows what diseases you can get! hahah

Oh, I noticed one typo at the beginning when Cain and Lawrence were in the coffin: placid shaft should have been flaccid. Anyway......how the HELL could they have had sex in a COFFIN???????? I thought those things were just big enough to fit one dead body! They seemed to move around pretty good in there! haha

And OMG Stiles heard EVERYTHING!!!!! I think he was jealous! :)

Too bad that "thing" in back of the furnace didn't show itself to Lawrence. Only makes Cain seem crazier! lol

Anyway, can't wait for the next update! Maybe the "thing" will make itself known when they're screwing! hahah

thanks for the update.

Lawrence is so shameless...having sex with Cain in a coffin...and Stiles knew that they were in the coffin and lied for them...looks like Stiles caught them going at it in the coffin...

I wonder what Peter's project were...and the chalk line behind the furnance, might be to keep something in, rather to keep people out...

can't wait for more~

And the Story of the Summer goes to......

Kudos for making me shake in fear, anxiety and laughter.
I haven't been this intrigued by a plot in quite a while.
I simply don't know what the flip is going? And that's the good
kind of WTF! Not the type where I just groan give up in frustration!
If I would I'd climb into your C:drive to see what's next, that's how
riled up I am.

Please continue soon.
~WR

(8) Focus on the murder plot Cain, now is not the time to be thinking of Lawrence's cock no matter how much you may want to ;) By the way I loved Cain's thoughts on Lawrence when they first got to the funeral home, I think that about summed up Lawrence pretty well :) It was also nice to see that Johnny has some smarts and is willing to use them to help Cain, that was actually rather quick thinking of him to come up with that.^^

Have I mentioned my want to throw Johnny at Lawrence, I have a picture of them in my head that I just can't get rid of. Basically it consists of an exasperated Lawrence (possibly pinching the bridge of his nose ;) and Johnny (being the fairly laid back kind of guy he is :) knowing what buttons he can push and just how much he can get away with, although he would probably eventually do what Lawrence was asking (eventually being the operative word ;) At least in my mind they seem like they would have an interesting dynamic, but maybe in your mind they act very different than that with each other.^^

Then we have Nana who could have a whole other side to her than first thought, though I find that hard to believe, on the other hand we haven't learned much about her. Maybe this (whatever it is) is just using her to blame things on to get Cain to question his trust in different people. Another conspiracy theory is that's not the real Nana, that something happened to her and this thing has been fooling everyone into thinking she's still around but that's a very farfetched idea that I really don't think even I believe. See what I'm doing, I figure if I keep throwing out ideas you won't be able to help yourself and you'll give me at least a little hint of what's going on, you know you want to type more than you should ;)

By the way was the pastor going to experiment because that would seem to bring a whole other side to what's going on. Whatever it is in the basement it's definitely creepy and I wouldn't go down there if my life depended on it, sadly I don't think Cain's smart enough to leave well enough alone. But I guess we'll see next chapter, or we'll get the continuation of Lawrence and Cain, either ones good in my books ^_^

I'm always impatient waiting for anything from you but I will try - hope your having a good night :)