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August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(11) I feel like we're finally going to start getting some answers which of course is why you're evil for ending it where you did ;) But I have to say that I'm officially creeped out, although dark dank labs with bodies strapped to slabs do tend to do that to people. After all that I'm even more curious to find out what happened and more importantly how it happened. It seems to be a kind of science (so to speak) I was beginning to think it was a bit of black magic and a touch of voodoo and ta-da, living dead. Pappy must have been one hell of a character.
As for Lawrence he seems rather laissez-faire about all this, which is par for the course I would say and Stiles, well he just seems to be all over the board. I do get the feeling though that in his own way he's trying to help, problem is he wants to help both the town and Cain. And of all the times for Johnny to go running off to Arizona (what's in Arizona anyway), he does seem to be getting a little more interesting as we go along I mean not many people would be suspicious of their own Nana. I wonder just what it is he thinks is going on and more importantly, is he right.
And speaking of (crazy) Nana, new theory is that Nana was supposed to have died awhile ago but living past her time is making her seriously cranky and miserable - hey I'd be cranky too if I was walking dead ;) It's either that or she's just this mean, although the hate she has for Charlie and her attitude towards Cain leads me to think there's something else. I wonder if it has something to do with the connection between Peter and Charlie, we still haven't found out yet just what's going on.
Can't wait to hear Stiles' explanation about the lab, maybe if we're lucky we'll get a few answers as to just what was done to Cain down there and how it affects everyone. And speaking of getting some history we get some truth about Cain's past and it seems he was willing to work for what he had it's just too bad one mistake could ruin it all, sadly the outcome isn't that surprising.
Great chapter, a bit of everything :) Worth the wait of a missed week, speaking of which hope everythings going okay at your end ^_^
As for Lawrence he seems rather laissez-faire about all this, which is par for the course I would say and Stiles, well he just seems to be all over the board. I do get the feeling though that in his own way he's trying to help, problem is he wants to help both the town and Cain. And of all the times for Johnny to go running off to Arizona (what's in Arizona anyway), he does seem to be getting a little more interesting as we go along I mean not many people would be suspicious of their own Nana. I wonder just what it is he thinks is going on and more importantly, is he right.
And speaking of (crazy) Nana, new theory is that Nana was supposed to have died awhile ago but living past her time is making her seriously cranky and miserable - hey I'd be cranky too if I was walking dead ;) It's either that or she's just this mean, although the hate she has for Charlie and her attitude towards Cain leads me to think there's something else. I wonder if it has something to do with the connection between Peter and Charlie, we still haven't found out yet just what's going on.
Can't wait to hear Stiles' explanation about the lab, maybe if we're lucky we'll get a few answers as to just what was done to Cain down there and how it affects everyone. And speaking of getting some history we get some truth about Cain's past and it seems he was willing to work for what he had it's just too bad one mistake could ruin it all, sadly the outcome isn't that surprising.
Great chapter, a bit of everything :) Worth the wait of a missed week, speaking of which hope everythings going okay at your end ^_^
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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ummm...Love the story but...I'm confused. I've been confused the entire time...about everything. I think I'll just keep reading and maybe I'll understand when the story reaches it's end but right now it's like reading in a different language lol!! =]
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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As usual my heart is pounding a mile a minute after reading one of your chapters... I'm confused but excited and want more! ;)
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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god......something wicked this way comes!!!
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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, OMG, OMG, what's happening??????? Shit, so Pappy really did these weird things to Cain, or no? And wtf is Stiles doing? Who's the boy on the table????? Is that supposed to be Cain?? Omg, I'm so fucking confused. Help!!!!!!
And Nana, what a fucking traitor! The whole town, the people can't die, their sicnesses get worse and they can't die. This is so weird. What can Cain do? His death will bring them peace, how?
OMG, you better update earlier than next week. wtf is happening??????? And wait, where's Johnny fit into all of this? He doesn't seem to be a part of it, from what that bitch Nana was saying. Johnny saw right thru her, but Johnny grew up there, how could he NOT be a part of it?????
And Nana, what a fucking traitor! The whole town, the people can't die, their sicnesses get worse and they can't die. This is so weird. What can Cain do? His death will bring them peace, how?
OMG, you better update earlier than next week. wtf is happening??????? And wait, where's Johnny fit into all of this? He doesn't seem to be a part of it, from what that bitch Nana was saying. Johnny saw right thru her, but Johnny grew up there, how could he NOT be a part of it?????
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August 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the update...
Poor Cain, he thought that Stiles couldn't cross the line, and he was caught instead. And not only that but some of his hidden memories are coming back and what Pappy used to do to Cain when he was a child...I wonder who the person is that Stiles has strapped down...and what the Lab is exactly, what the liquids repesent....so many questions...I can't wait to read more to find out.
Poor Cain, he thought that Stiles couldn't cross the line, and he was caught instead. And not only that but some of his hidden memories are coming back and what Pappy used to do to Cain when he was a child...I wonder who the person is that Stiles has strapped down...and what the Lab is exactly, what the liquids repesent....so many questions...I can't wait to read more to find out.
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August 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Continues to intrigue and delight! Hopefully the Epitaph does not mean the End just yet? 'Purr
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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AAArrgh! I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble, because this is EPIC... My heart has never pounded so hart and I've never been this damn scared by a internet-story before, and that's the truth! Go with whatever your guts tell you, because they have been dead right this far... ;)
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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I am more confused than ever now! Why is Lawrence's dad buried in Pappy's house? Why is he a ghost? Why did Pappy kill Lawrence's dad? And the big one: HOW THE FUCK IS THIS ALL CAIN'S FAULT??????? How did Pappy make Cain an abodimation (sp?)? Wouldn't Cain's mother have something to do w/that? OMG, I don't know what to think now? Is Stiles gonna help Cain, or bring him back to those people who want to kill him? And jeez, Lawrence totally turned on him, what an ass.
He did have a great line tho that made me crack up: I really do enjoy your company, though mostly just when you're lying face down. hahah Great line!
Ok, now I'm gonna have to wait one full week for an update; oh no! I just remembered! You said maybe LONGER than a week!!!! Omg, what am I gonna do????????
He did have a great line tho that made me crack up: I really do enjoy your company, though mostly just when you're lying face down. hahah Great line!
Ok, now I'm gonna have to wait one full week for an update; oh no! I just remembered! You said maybe LONGER than a week!!!! Omg, what am I gonna do????????
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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
omg!! can't wait!!
hope it's a happy ending >.>"
Thank you
hope it's a happy ending >.>"
Thank you